rate_review Reviews

You have an interesting start, but it is too short to really give me enough of an impression to say "it's good" or "it's bad." You don't really tell us how they got there or what's going to happen, just that they're caged in a dungeon.

Also, someone is one word.

It's a good start. Fix a few run-on sentences and make it a bit longer and it will be interesting I'm sure.

This is a great start--keep going!

Linda