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December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just read chapter two. It was sweet. I feel sorry for Bex sbecause of her mother's lack of caring.
One thing I notised--- it seems that you (like me) enjoy the movie Love Acctually. There was at least two lines (perhps three) diectly from that movie in this chapter. I have never notised that, perhaps you do this more then I realize. Or were you watching it while writing this chapter? lol
One thing I notised--- it seems that you (like me) enjoy the movie Love Acctually. There was at least two lines (perhps three) diectly from that movie in this chapter. I have never notised that, perhaps you do this more then I realize. Or were you watching it while writing this chapter? lol
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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you updated! And Cassandra will be next. I’m in happiness!
This was a very romantic chapter by the way. It’s nice to see Bex and Holden are finally together.
I can’t believe what Bex’s mom told her. Of course her parents always have been rather clueless just leaving her like they did before in your other story. So I guess in many ways, Bex must be used to it. It must hurt bad though.
It sounds rather dreamy having them both live in Bex’s tiny flat, living on love. I hope everything works out okay for them.
Lovely chapter though!
This was a very romantic chapter by the way. It’s nice to see Bex and Holden are finally together.
I can’t believe what Bex’s mom told her. Of course her parents always have been rather clueless just leaving her like they did before in your other story. So I guess in many ways, Bex must be used to it. It must hurt bad though.
It sounds rather dreamy having them both live in Bex’s tiny flat, living on love. I hope everything works out okay for them.
Lovely chapter though!
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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Worth the wait, Evie, this was a lovely chapter; I enjoyed it so much.
Of course, it's never a good idea to say yes to the Sun!
Bex's mother sounds absolutely grim - 'Don't you think you're old enough to call me Minty' indeed. I could see her in my mind's eye, all Joan-Crawfordesque in a turban and swimsuit brandishing a cigarette holder.
How sweet that they went to Wandsworth Common (even though I got followed across it by some creepy weirdo once, lol). This scandal has had a postive effect on Bex and Jack's relationship - it's a relief to have everything out in the open.
(Oh, and was Louisa May Alcott anything to do with being Beth March in that quiz? Ha ha).
Of course, it's never a good idea to say yes to the Sun!
Bex's mother sounds absolutely grim - 'Don't you think you're old enough to call me Minty' indeed. I could see her in my mind's eye, all Joan-Crawfordesque in a turban and swimsuit brandishing a cigarette holder.
How sweet that they went to Wandsworth Common (even though I got followed across it by some creepy weirdo once, lol). This scandal has had a postive effect on Bex and Jack's relationship - it's a relief to have everything out in the open.
(Oh, and was Louisa May Alcott anything to do with being Beth March in that quiz? Ha ha).
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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you are writing another one! I lovvved this chapter, the dress sounded hot.
And for some reason... I don't feel bad for Annabelle. She blackmailed Holden, she knew he loved someone else. Oh well.
And for some reason... I don't feel bad for Annabelle. She blackmailed Holden, she knew he loved someone else. Oh well.
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i absolutly love the holden and bex stories great work ! PLEASE continue !!!!
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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! Lovely stuff, Evie - is this a oneshot or will the story continue?
I once walked from Smithfield (nr. St Pauls) to Tooting. At four in the morning. Sorry, that's completely irrelevant, isn't it? LOL.
I guess I can see why Holden was such a jerk now...all the same, he can't seem to have a relationship with one woman without screwing up another's life, can he? It's crunch time for him, I think!
I once walked from Smithfield (nr. St Pauls) to Tooting. At four in the morning. Sorry, that's completely irrelevant, isn't it? LOL.
I guess I can see why Holden was such a jerk now...all the same, he can't seem to have a relationship with one woman without screwing up another's life, can he? It's crunch time for him, I think!
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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooo Evie, I’m so excited! You wrote a sequel!
Now Rebecca looks like she’s dressed to kill and I love the added touch with the pillbox hat with the net. Green's my favorite color too! Lol
Showing up late – tsk tsk – how funny. I think she made an impression.
So now I understand why Holden broke up with her. I guess maybe he’s not such a cad after all. So now I'm wondering what’s going to happen with Annabelle.
Great Job! Thanks so much for continuing this!!
Now Rebecca looks like she’s dressed to kill and I love the added touch with the pillbox hat with the net. Green's my favorite color too! Lol
Showing up late – tsk tsk – how funny. I think she made an impression.
So now I understand why Holden broke up with her. I guess maybe he’s not such a cad after all. So now I'm wondering what’s going to happen with Annabelle.
Great Job! Thanks so much for continuing this!!
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah...who cares about Annabelle!! She made her bed now she can sleep in it...all alone! lol I am so glad you are continueing their story!! woohoo! I can't wait to read more! I sound so greedy!