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I really love this story and I cannot wait for an update! I think the way you portrayed her early captivity was better than most people but I wonder when you will make Daizus learn she was a virign as well as a upper class?

Great story! You have a wonderful style of writing, and I've thoroughly enjoyed reading so far. I hope you decide to continue; I'd hate to think of such an exciting piece being cut off at the knees. I appreciate the way you've integrated the cultures into the story, and even taught us some Latin! Good luck with everything, I'm looking forward to more chapters :)

I am so happy you updated this story. I was afraid you were going to get to the point you diod klast time and stop but this is a new-new chapter!! Yea!! I can't wait for the next chapter.

I'm so glad you updated this story! I read this AGES ago and since it had been so long since the last chapter had been put up I was sure that it had been abandoned. I hope there is more to come!

wow I'm glad i decided to read that =D
Its a wonderful story so far, so good in fact read it all in one sitting! Please don't leave me on a cliffhanger! =P
In reference to your note on the first chapter your english is fine and you don't have too many errors, just a few spelling and minor grammar ones, and i would be happy to beta-read it for you, you can email me at devine.liz@gmail.com [hope that didn't seem offensive]. I think you did a great job developing the characters and its amusing and captivating to watch them interact. Your hints about their pasts leave me wanting more. Lastly i love your little notes that you include in the chapters, they make it all the more humorous. Damn this was a long review! So now that I've taken up all your time with this please update soon!! =D

Oh come on, update! You got farther into the story the last time you posted it. Please update.

When are you going to be updating this, I misss it and can't wait for the next chapter.

Update...NOW!! You can't just rewrite the story and leave us again, I was so happy you had started on this again. So you must write it, you must finish it!!

A good one. Careful it doesn't fall into the boring type of romance.

Omg i looked for this story again to review it - i read it when i didnt have an account on fan fic...but it was soo good i loved it a lot!Feisty women can be annoying sometimes lol...I dont know wether your guna do another chapter..but it was amazing anyway!