rate_review Reviews

Wow. The tone of the first chapter was amazingly different; really reminiscent of articles in gay porn magazines, with that hard edge that's "all business." The second chapter had that too, though it wasn't as intense; it slipped a little more back into a female POV in a few places -- but I don't think this is a bad thing at all! Actually, I'm rather fascinated at how the two might be melded into a kind of hardcore, rough style that appeals to yaoi fans as well as male erotica readers. I think a line that captured this was: "His hole is pulling me in nice and tight, practically sucking on me like a second mouth..." -- somehow that rides a line between the two, sort of blatant, but with a little simile thrown in. You've done something really interesting here! Oh, and did I mention it was incredibly hot? So inspiring...I wanna write now...you're awesome, Cody-san! (and many, many apologies for being so slow to review your work! punish me as you will master)

very hot can't wait to read more of the three men together update soon!

Holy crap...the hotness....to much hotness...I definitely cannot wait to see more of this!

That was incredible. Maybe it's my infatuation with gay men, but that got me so hot. You really should write more like this.

For something so short, that was amazingly hot. *love*

Damn! Fantastic twist at the end. And I really like the dominant... character? Persona? Whatever you feel like calling him... I think he would be a fun personality to write. Now, on to the rest of your stories!

kinky and easy to read. Not too shabby, if I do say do myself. You really should consider writing more m/m, yeah? You have a talent, that you do! Banzai!!! ^_-

I seriously love this story--sequel, sequel! I would like to know what happen next as well as the history to why they end up together like that. I also somehow like the fact that you keep them nameless, since it makes it easier to imagine them to look however we like, though I know this will no longer be if you would really go on with the sequel. I will still pick the sequel however and really hpe you would consider it.

Well done.

Oh hell that was so amazingly hot. A sequel for this would be just great :D