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for Boyfriend's Birthday

by exploregirl1124

person sjd
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Terrific beginning, very descriptive. You will be continuing this, won't you? You can't just leave us hanging like this - you tease! Please update ^_^
person Krash
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That one wasn't funny - just hot. Thankyou for writing all these stories, I don't know whether I want to laugh or...
person phillis
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice work, explore. It sounds like you're beginning a great story here!

Keep it up!