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Well, this chapter certainly made me happy. I'm glad Chris and Jason finally got to do it, even if they didn't necessarily go all the way. And I really cannot wait to see how the story ends, even if the fact that it's ending does make me a bit sad.

Can't wait to read what happens at New Dawn. It is hard to believe that this story is drawing to a close. Seems like it could go on forever:)

awww jason's first birthday party. that had to feel so good to him to have people in his life that cares so much about him. i'm just sorry that he has to move on, just when he found a family. it's not fair, but life is sometimes not fair. chris and jason's last night together was sweet. i hope this new place, new dawn, is a good place. jason deserves to have good things now, especially after all the bad. i wonder if police is providing security in case he gets kidnapped again by jonathan. someone really needs to catch that horrible man. anywho...great job on the chapter and i can't wait for the next one!

PLease update! C'mon I'm begging you!! I gotta know if Him and Chris Have a Happy Ending! PLEASE!

lloving this story

While I absolutely hate being coerced into reviewing, here I am because I can't wait to hear about New Dawn. Thank God Chris and Jason finally got to blowjobs! I've being waiting forever for that :) Very nice.

sniffles you havent updated yet why not. Im still waiting here please update soon okay

I've gotten so BEHIND!!!!! XD Gah, GREAT updates!!! I was like, "NOOOOO!!!!" then "YOU CAN DO IT!!!!" and finally "AWWWWWWWW!!!!!" through the 3 updates I missed lol. THANK YOU soooo much for them! ^_^ Made me feel all warm inside when Chris was finally reuinted with Jason, but I'm sooo worried about them with the whole New Dawn place... I hope this wont pull them apart :(

Oh my god. I love this story. I read it all in one day, that's how much I love it.
Chris is awesome. I'm trying to remember if you said he had a mohawk or not. I visualize his hair as being more or less an ungelled mohawk, with the hair all frizzy and dry from all the dying. I like that for some reason.
There are a few errors, such as that you continuously say "grouched" when you mean "crouched" and you say "loose" when you mean "lose". But really, for a non-native English speaker, you are very impressive. You write better than most English speakers I know.
I'm hoping I won't have nightmares about Jonathan tonight. X(. I imagine him as being very sexy, and that only makes him creepier.
I love all of the characters, though. Even the creepy ones. Kevin is very fun, and I hope he'll be coming back.
I am also anxiously awaiting HOT SEX between Chris and Jason. I need it. Now. Noooooowwwwww. XD
When are you updating?

Yy an update . i woner if jason and cris end up moving in with one another thatll be so awome i hope that theyll be okay. please update soon.