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for Pain and.. pain?

by traxie

person Anon
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"I’m sure I don’t have to tell you that alcohol and drugs are not prohibited."

That line is rather confusing. Either this is a very liberal halfway home or it's supposed to be:

"alcohol and drugs are not permitted."

or

"alcohol and drugs are prohibited."

Hate to point things out like that ]: Otherwise, I've been following your story since really early on. Every time I see an update it really does make my day. Excellent job!
person dutsada
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NO~~~ its the end of the chapter damn.... Thanks for the update... hope the next one will be up soon~~~
person wynja
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a cliffie! Evil of you to go away NOW! ;o) Can't wait...
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No! Again with the cliffhangers. Anyway. Nice chapter, and, as always, it was very much appreciated. Now I'm just waiting for a bit of resolution to the ending of this chapter.
person mcdgoddess
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update! I feel so sorry for Jason. I really hope that nothing bad happens to him.
person Amanda
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story so much words can not explain XD but iam sooo sad that its almost over D= i wish it would never end but that would be a little hard XD so ya ur a vantastic writer and i just wanted to share that with u =) oh ya and by the way,, how did u come up with the story in the first place? what inspired u?
person mcdgoddess
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That can't be end! You can't leave us with the "nagging thought." I hope we can find out more in another story.
person SODA
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, his first blow job. Chris is too sweet, all concerned and worried for poor Jason. Loved the last couple of chapters, sorry I didnt review. Great chapter, update soon please!!!
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well that was the best chapter so far :]
Please update soon!
person wynja
schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Awww... got tears in my eyes, both the happy and the sad kind... feel so sorry about the separation... I'm also in two minds about you having finished the story, 'cause I can't wait to read more but at the same time I really don't want it to end... *sigh*