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CHAPTER 49
Hi, traxie,

I think I overlooked reviewing this fic *slaps self*. I really like it. It was very sad at the beginning, sort of like the kid won't make it. He didn't even have a name until chapter two :) As the fic progressed, Jason was subtly changing, becoming stronger. I liked that. Also, I liked the fact that Child services and a foster home were involved. This made the story so much more realistic.

This is a very good read.

I love happy endings this made me smile.

I sware if U ruin this for me I will kill you <3

thanx for the grate story <3

Oh tears of joy. I've always thought Kevin was coming back and he makes the perfect "big brother" for Jason. He is who Jason needed to make his transition and now Jason can feel safe, protected and even loved. I'm so happy for Jason. He got what he thought he would never have, a family and even a boyfriend. It's great to see Kevin back in his life and willing to care for Jason. I just hope Jason's future is better than his past. Oh and I hope they find Jonathan and his father and put them under the jail so they would never see the light of day! Great story and I loved every minute of it...I can't wait for your epilogue and to read your other stories.

yay its getting interesting i dont want it to ever end...Plz continue i hope that troy comes back into the picture...not as his boyfriend though as his friend or something jason belongs to chris yay please continue

Hey.
Just wanted to ask if I could be on your mailing list.
What I don't get is why Jason can't just live with Chris when he gets his own apartment...?

Oh my... You sure know how to keep people on their toes...
Nethermind that you are so good! I can't wait to read more!
I have loads of questions I'm sure you will be ansering in the next chapters so I won't bother you with them... I really find Jason endearing even if I want to slap him sometimes and say "come on! you're 20 get a hold of yourself!Stop crying and grow some backbone!" but I can see he is slowly getting better.
I wanted to congratulate you for your wrighting too, I know for a fact that it's not easy to write in something other than your first language. You're really good and even if there is some mistakes here and there, I'm usually so into the story that I don't even notice them (that's how good you are lol).
Anyway I'm babbling again, sorry.
Keep on with the good work!

KEVIN!!! Cause he was expecting Ron, Jonathan, or his father-- so the only feasible answer... wait or it could be that boy-- Benton's nephew. But I hope, secretly, that its Kevin.

EEEEEEK!!!!! *bounces up and down in seat* You can't DO this to me! You just CAN'T!!! Who is that person talking to him?! Is it Ron?! His dad or Jonathan?!?! Pleeeease let it be Chris!!! *cries* The tention is killing meeeee XDDD lol

Awesome cliffy :P As a writer as well, I know the need for them, and gaaah is it a good one! lol Update whenever you can mate! ^_^

That was cruel, ending it there was very very cruel. But also very amazing, I'm loving this story and can't wait to read more. Oh, and just to let you know, in the last chapter you said that drugs and alcohol are not prohibited, meaning they're allowed, not sure it that was what you wanted. Please write more soon!

Oh...who caught up to him...was it ron? benton? chris? jonatha? his dad? who...i am sitting on pins and needles waiting. can't wait for the update!