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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAY!!!!!!!! KEVIN!!!! Omg, that surprised me SO bad! =O It made me SOOOOO HAPPY!!!!! XD *jumps up and down* I can't wait for the next update!... and the last >< *pouts* I kinda wished this story never ended, but now that it's becoming a "Happy" ending, I'm ok ^_^ Jason deserves all the happiness in the world!
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAAY! Kevin's back! I like him... this chapter was pure feel-good, I loved it... so good to se things are getting better!
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ummm I wanted to say that i loved your story so far.. I wouldn't be able to tell you grammar errors. Since english is not my native language either.
Jason is some really unfotunate guy I would say..
The only thing that bugged me a little is that Jason seems a lot younger than his age.. I mean i can only piture him as a 12 years old guy.. Lol (XD) he really looks like a kid to me. At fist he looks older and then when the story goes on he seems to get younger. (I'm only at chapter 30 tho.. ) Oh and he really says sorry too much (I'm sure that it bugs you too lol) C'MON JASON WAKE UP!!! GET A HOLD OF YOURSELF!!!
And maybe some "feminine" support could help him. He never really had a mother or any woman in his life..
Anyway this story is great! I MEAn REALLY AWESOME.. I had been searching these kind of story for a long time!!
=D
Jason is some really unfotunate guy I would say..
The only thing that bugged me a little is that Jason seems a lot younger than his age.. I mean i can only piture him as a 12 years old guy.. Lol (XD) he really looks like a kid to me. At fist he looks older and then when the story goes on he seems to get younger. (I'm only at chapter 30 tho.. ) Oh and he really says sorry too much (I'm sure that it bugs you too lol) C'MON JASON WAKE UP!!! GET A HOLD OF YOURSELF!!!
And maybe some "feminine" support could help him. He never really had a mother or any woman in his life..
Anyway this story is great! I MEAn REALLY AWESOME.. I had been searching these kind of story for a long time!!
=D
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October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Phew, I'm glad it was Kevin and not one of the bad guys! You scared me last week. ;)
Although I found it rather rushed in a few places, I liked the last chapter and I hope we'll get to see how Jason adapts to this new situation in the epilogue. Don't get me wrong, I'd love to see this story go on and on since I adore the characters, but for once I'd like to see Jason happy and content with the way things turned out.
Oh, and I hope you won't forget to include Chris in the epilogue *cough* youknowwhatImean *cough*.
Although I found it rather rushed in a few places, I liked the last chapter and I hope we'll get to see how Jason adapts to this new situation in the epilogue. Don't get me wrong, I'd love to see this story go on and on since I adore the characters, but for once I'd like to see Jason happy and content with the way things turned out.
Oh, and I hope you won't forget to include Chris in the epilogue *cough* youknowwhatImean *cough*.
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October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story! I just finished reading it (all in one day, actually) and I think it's amazing. The plot is interesting and the characters work well together. Is there more coming?
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October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i cant beleve that this is the last chapter im gonna miss jason ans chris and the bouncer and im so happy ofr him, he finaly found a plce for him to live hapily...i wanted to atleast know how his new life with bouncer dude was like. Im so sad now i was happy that you updated and then bam LAST CHAPTER *SNIFFLES* im so depreded this was a great story and im glad that i foind it thansk so much. Ill see if i like any of your other stories if so ill definatly review...i syill hate you for ending this though
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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay!! so happy that it updated so quickly, i check this story every other day for updates ^_^ can't wait to see what happens next.
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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eagerly awaiting the epilogue.
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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
im happy that kevin is back in the picture although i was hopping that jason would end up attracting a new love interest at the institute you add even more drama and competition for chris
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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!!
:D
He's finally happy!!!!!
Thank God!
I can't wait for the epilogue. Hopefully it's not sad >.<
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He's finally happy!!!!!
Thank God!
I can't wait for the epilogue. Hopefully it's not sad >.<