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Oh my god. i've been reading this story.and each chapter makes me want to cry. you are going a GREAT job on it.

I do not like to review, But for you I will. Im enjoying the story and hopeing for another chapter!

Has Jason's dad found someone? Is he falling in love with someone? It has been a long time since his wife went. Is that why he's suddenly taking a pride himself in his home? Is someone going to be asked back? Is he becoming ashamed of the way he's treated his son? That still doesn't excuse him not interferring when Jonathon stole into his son's room during poker night. Jason's dad, and the other players, must have known what he was doing. I'm surprised the others haven't tried it as well.....

Oh...where you have Troy come back with the drinks in his hand...It's 'two', not 'too'...
'when Troy walked in with two cans of Coke in hand.'

So glad to see an update. HOpe to see another one from you soon!

Whew new reader here, and I just finished reading all 12 chapters in one sitting. It’s like a horrible accident that you simply can’t look away from but you still look anyway. Your story is so dark and sad, but so well written I feel like one of the bad guys’ watching what is happening to poor Jason but I do nothing to step in to help him. That is how good your story is, it feels so real. I'm actually am shaking because I am so angry with all of the people that is hurting him, I’m even angry with Troy because he is really not paying attention to Jason, he is so full of himself he fails to take notice of him. I’m sure that will change but oh my, poor Jason needs a break here. I know you said that will happen because you like happy endings, but I hope they all pay for what they are doing all of them, his dad, Jonathan, the keeper and that rat I forgot his name who makes the kids fight may they all rot in hell! However I really would not mind if they each die a very slow and painful death first. Ok I’m calm now; oh boy I can’t wait for your next update. Great story, now I will go and have a nice cry. Thank you.
Jewel

I love this story - these days I think I come to this site just to check to see if you've updated. It's so easy to love J. and feel sorry for this situation. This chapter almost made me cry, how he was falling into nothingness and is only being pulled back out to be dragged down again. Poor guy can't even have his friend anymore. As always, I can't wait for the next update. Keep up the good work.

Chapter 12

This chapter had me in tears myself!
I really feel for this kid! So sad! So abused!!

Thanks,
R

I actually sat wincing with him, waiting to get hit.
What's going to happen? Update! Updaaate!
....
Omg, he's giving away his own son to Jonathan, isn't he? that bastard!
Or feeling guilty?.. Nahh.. >_< Come on! Update!

Oh its good to see you are back. I hope to see more soon.

Oh man...I wonder what Jonathan told to Jason's dad for him to be acting like that!?
It must be so hard on that kid! 'cause he just never knows when his dad's gonna get angry and hit him or something! T___T
I wish I could hug to little guy! *sniff* I really hope he'll get justice for everything his father (and his friends) put him through!
He so deserves someone to love him!! ;;

Anyways, thanks alot for the update! It was really good! Ur such a great writer! I luv u! LMAO ^^

I wished you'd put up a new chapter...:)