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Cool, two chapters in as many days! (since I read the other one just last night!)Poor J. even the doctor is a molester. I want Mr. A. to notice something's wrong (which I think he already does) and save him. I think he's T's uncle :) Can't wait for the next chapter, poor baby will get hurt again.

i have a small question. jason mentioned somewhere in chaps 1-3 that he didn't like going to school but in chap 6, he wished to go to school. i know this is some minor detail but i am very meticulous and curious. so, is jason lying? is it part of the story? i've only read up to chap 6 though, and i've done it in a condition where i cannot read and analyze well. sorry -_- pretty okay story for someone who doesn't speak English as the native language (correct me if i'm wrong. but i'm sure this fic has an author's note saying that English isn't his/her native language)

damn. he never gets a break.

Chapter 14

Man! Jason really needs a knight in shining armor, but I can't
find one in your story! The possible knights turn out to be a little too dark!!

But, maybe there's one!! Love your writing and the way you've totally
hooked me on Jason!!

Thanks,
R

Wow, I really can't wait to see what happens next.

So bloody awesome! The absolute intensity of this chapter was great - really holds your attention and leaves you wanting more. I thought after his father saw how bad he was doing and swore and everything that he would take him to the hospital, but I really want to know what happens now that he isn't. I love my angst, but I want J. to be okay too, maybe get his friend back and turn that into a boyfriend ;P No joke, I come to this site to see your updates, so please update soon. But I don't mind waiting either because I know when it comes it'll be great!

Ohhhhh that Jonathan needs a good hard kick in the balls! And as for Jason's father....words fail me!!! His name shouldn't even be mentioned in the same breath as the word 'father'...

So, what was really going on? Why all the strange behaviour from Jason's dad? And why has he now reverted back to being the bastard he is? Will he get a medic to come look at Jason? Will he finally feed him? Or will Jason accept he can't take anymore, and run away?

Really sad, heart wrenching chapter...Can't wait to find out what happens.

OMGGGG poor poor Jason.
you really need to make up fr his suffering
-- needs happy ennding --

.....omg....
This is incredibly said! TT____TT
I just can't believe it! *criesX3* ...Plz tell me he'll be alright soon! I just don't know what to say anymore!;;
'cause I just want him to get better! >_<

Anyways, thanks alot for the chappi and I can't wait for more! *hugs*

Chapter 13

I'm so glued to this story!
Your writing is very exciting (despite all
the absolute torture Jason is suffering right now!)

It makes me say, can't wait, Can't Wait, CAN'T WAIT!!!

Thanks,
R