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Chapter 20

Que the knight-in-shining-armor!!!
Jason is almost dead!!!
My vote is for one very angry/violent,
but annoying neighbor!!! Or the big, strong, but
easily annoyed bouncer!!

Wow!! This life I don't understand but I can't look
away!! Terrific story!!!

Thanks,
R

Troy really falls in love very quick. But I guess he's a somewhat lonely person so I think it's understandable how friendship becomes love faster for him. The loneliest of people tend to fall in love the quickest anyway according to psychology :| Now I'm feeling sad for Troy. He must be so bored without "real" friends, and spending each day in that rundown apartment with his odd uncle. Too bad Jason doesn't see that, since to him all relationships (except the one he has with Trist) mean shoving something in his hole. Troy is in love with the right person at the wrong time :( I like him.

I find Tristran unstable. I'm still not sure if he's sincerely nice because he's too innocent and goody. I don't know why but I sometimes think he's a spy or a traitor =)) But don't mind me, it's just one of my messed up thoughts. =))

“Too nice. People aren’t nice without a reason. Especially bouncers.”

Yes Traxie... must have 20 more chapters!!!
No problem!! Some stories just take a little longer
to develop!!! And Jason's got some major problems!!!

Could Kevin be a bouncer/good guy/white knight/under
cover FBI/perv?!!!

His dad is a totally bizarre!!! Please have him beaten!!!

Thanks,
R

I don't like that Kevin, neither. Jason's right, there's something not right about him. And why did he call one of them, Cabe? I don't understand either why Jason's dad went so ballistic because he went out. Not only did he beat him, but he sent him to the Cave too. Boy, he must have come back from his little vacation really pissed off. Either that, or he wanted some excuse to get Jason out of the flat for a few days. But, then why beat him? I could accept him doing one, but not the other....it just seemed wrong somehow.
It was good to read that little Tristan at least gets one night of rest off. What does he do with himself, I wonder?

O______o Man... I did Not expect that!! >< I had a feeling that if he wasn't home by the time his 'dad' arrived that it wouldn't be pretty between them, but there's just no way that I could've known that h would've beat Jason up that badly and STILL sent him to the Cave afterwards!!! ;;
I was going crazy out of my mind when I read this chapter! I Royally wanted to Kill that Son-of-a-Bitch!!! (and always WILL Want TO btw!)
I REALLY do hate Jason's 'dad' with a passion! I can't wait for him to die(or whatever torture u think fits him! 'cause he sure has it coming!)

It's easy to see that Jason's close to a mental breakdown or something! The poor kid's completly exhausted and weak and he still has all that shit happening to him! >__<

Wow, I can't wait to meet someone that actually makes sense here! (other then Tris) 'cause I hate that nobody's helping those kids! T___T *sniff*

Anyways, even tho I'm said and angry that Jason's peaceful moments were cut off like that, I still liked the update! And I can't wait to see what happens next! :P Help those little guys soon oki? ^__^ Thanks!

I just love your story! Jason is such a great character.I like the way he's torn between different emotions. Guess Troy isn't a nice guy after all... seems like he isn't cluless about Jasons situation and considers him someone how's easy to take adventage of, because of it. Interesting turn of events, I'm so curious at their further development!

Ok, even tho Jason was happy at the end of the chapter, I'm still pretty pissed off at Troy for jumping on Jason like that again not even hours after he said that he was sorry!!! >_< I really didn't get that! I mean, he didn't ask to be Jason's BF or anything before he did that and he didn't even stop when Jason asked him to! So if we put all that together plus the fact that he REALLY didn't take Jason's felling into consideration, I'm a bit angry at him right now! grr LOL But I'm still happy that he made Jason fell safe and happy! And I hope that Troy will start to open his eyes and ears to be able to 'read' Jason a bit better! 'cause even if I'm not at all happy for what he did, I still want him to be the one who helps Jason! He should really start to question and talk to Jason more now, just to make sure that Jason doesn't fell used and all when he's around Troy. :) I really do want Jason to be happy! And I still want his father to go to jail! LOL
Anyways, I can't wait to see how things will go from here, even if their relationship is a bit shaky right now! But I like to tell myself that this is a start and things aren't over yet, so... Let's see what happens next! :P

...Man, I wrote alot! O___o Lol I hope it wasn't all bullshit! Hahaha!!!
Thanks alot for the update! *hugs*

Ok, at first I was just so mad at Troy. How could he be so stupid, I thought. But then I realized, he wants a proper relationship with Jason. Awwwww, how cute! Little Jason now is looking forward to 'tomorrow', so I bet it's time for, 'cue Dad'....

Still very nervous about Jonathan. Or should I say, about the lack of Jonathan. He must be up to something. I find it hard to believe he's given up on trying to take Jason. I wonder if he's saving up all his money, to offer to Jason's dad at the next poker night. We all know that jerk won't turn money down, and his word to his son will mean nothing.....

I like the chapter, but I'm not too sure about how much I like T now. Sure he just wanted to have some fun (hopefully with someone he wants to be his boyfriend) but he did force him, didn't notice J was about ready to cry through the whole thing, and didn't even notice that he didn't come. Maybe I'm just highly sensative, but if I was J I wouldn't have been happy or feeling safe - I would have run out of there first chace I got and cried that my only friend only wants to fuck, but I'd be thankful he hadn't gone that far. I look forward to reading more because I want to see what they'll do next. I also want to know what's up with B. and find out what's bitting him in the ass ;P

Oh, Jason, you poor fucked up kid. I knew Troy was no good. I hope Jason and Tristan wind up together in a nice platonic relationship (because eww, minor not generally my thing).

Re: the title, it's kind of growing on me. I thought it was silly when I first saw the story, but now I like it. :-)