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for Pain and.. pain?

by traxie

person Tristram
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't review in a while, but it's still as good as ever. I'm glad T finally gets to go home, but I really feel bad for J now. Even when he explained things K didn't apologize - I wonder if J will be more mistrusting of him again even though he tried to make him feel better after. I can't wait for more
person memorietrail
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow ,you can't stop there. More please
person Rosei
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 21

Sorry to see Tristan go, but happy to see him go!!!
Jason is so whipped!!! Poor kid!!! Like the sleeping in
the linen closet because I like the smell of linen closets and
I believe that he can actually get rest in there!!!

Love the PJ's!!! Ducks and Smurfs!! They are kids afterall!!!

Thanks for the chapter!!!
R
person Mitts
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
But...just WHAT is it, that little Tristan is going home to? You can bet anything you like, that the poor boy will be back at the Cave working again as soon as his family need some more money!
And what is Kevin going to do, once he finds out his favourite is leaving? Will he become brash and daring, and do what Jason fears all along?
And will Jason pass the Keepers inspection? He should do, seeing as how his fever has broken.

Great chapter as always.....Big thumbs up!
person Rin
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story always keeps me on the edge of my seat. I can't wait til you post the next chapter.
person memorietrail
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh how very sad. Hope it gets better soon. More please!
person kura701
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg! i love it when you update!!!
person BennyPeace
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha I feel like Kevin is an undercover cop.
person kura701
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor tristain, hes one of thoese people you have to love. and kevin?!?!?!? I hope its love for him and tristain.
I what a happy ending for cabe. :) i am allways looking forword to your next chapter!!
person Mitts
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DOH! (Slaps forehead...)I totally forgot that Cabe was Jason's surname....

Another real 'up/down' chapter for my emotions. Poor Jason ill, the Keeper agreeing not to call his dad and letting him rest up for two days, only to then kick him from his room and making him seek a bed wherever he can find somewhere to sleep...Little Tristan tending lovingly to Jason, only to be upset by the concerned comment Jason makes.....

I'm getting more worried about Kevin's intentions regarding Tristan, especially if he is grooming the little boy. Doesn't he care that Tristan will be kicked out of the Cave, if he touches him? His attitude towards Jason certainly seems to resemble jealousy.

Still undecided as to why Jason's dad sent him there though. It will be interesting to see what excuse you come up with....

That was a really quick update, thank you.......

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