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Thanks for the new chapter! Soo - that's a nice cliffhanger. What is J. going to do? is he finally going to run away from his father or is he going to choose the other kind of exit and try to kill himself?(Somehow I got the feeling it's going to be the lettter option)
Can't wait for the next chapter! I now that I'm greedy.

finally! Jason has found some courage to conclude that he needs to get the hell outta there! more please~~~~~

holy shit im excited as to wat will happen next!!!!! ur writing is amazing i love how u do it.any way update u just made my STRESSFULL day MUCH,MUCH,MUCH better thanx!!!!

The chapter was great, but whether he just drank enough to keep hydrated or more, after even a day he would need to pee. So not very realistic...

Oh, the realization at the end was awesome! I hope Jason manages to stick up for himself successfully by the end of the story, although it sounds like his options, even if he winds up escaping his tormentors, are pretty limited, since he hasn't finished high school. I can't wait to see where you go with this.

I hope Troy gets his. He's such an ass.

Chapter 23

GREAT CHAPTER!!
Finally!! I hope Jonathan gets some major punishment right back at him!!!
I suspect the Keeper and Kevin could dole it out too!!!

POOR KID!!!! Jason so needs another life!! Even this life, with Kevin
taking care of him, would be a major improvement!! I'm done thinking
that Jason's going to be rescued though. BUT HE'S JUST GOTTA BE!!!!

Thanks for the chapter!
R

I just started reading this story earlier today and already made it up to chapter 23... I honestly don't know what exactly keeps me reading it, but I think it's the hope that eventually things will get better for Jason.
You put that poor boy through so much crap. And I thought -I- was terrible to my characters.

Just a thought; maybe you can have him have some more positive run-ins with Troy, and have Jason start to form a little bit of a backbone? I know you must have most of this story planned out and I don't want to tell you how to write it, but it seems from Jason's current state, he might start fighting back harder and getting things to look up for him. Or at least for everyone to stop fucking him over, in either context of the word.
I'm starting to like Kevin though. I really hope he turns out to be a better character than just the little bits of kindness he shows tells us. And I would really love to see Jonathan get hid hard with whatever shit comes flying his way. Same for Jason's dad. Dirty rat-bastards. >>

Also, every now and then I act as editor for other writers. :3 I'm very good with English [I should be as it's my first language] and could probably teach you a few things too. Drop me a message if you're interested and I'd be happy to help.

I'm ridiculously addicted to your story! It's been really great so far and I just want to take Jason and Tristan home with me (But not in the perverted way, just cause they're so sad!!!!) Anyway, please don't stop until you hit the end cause I would be so sad! This is seriously the best story I've read on here in a long time!

I guess it was only a matter of time before Jonathon thought to buy Jason's services. What's the Keeper going to do now though, ban him from buying more time with Jason?
And Kevin...he's getting more and more complex. I don't know if he's a good guy or a bad guy.
The end of the chapter has me worried. Jason sounds as if he's getting desperate. He wants out of this life...but I just hope he's not thinking of taking the most drastic way out!

Thanks for the dating up, though you have a great deal to do:)