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I detest Jonathan and Jason's father so much! You really know how to describe a character's agony. And I'm starting to wonder if everything wil turn out okay for Jason... Things just keep going downhill.
Great chapter!

If he'd decided to escape, why didn't he do so before his father came back??? Especially since Jonathan's back with the father's consent.
Still, great chapter. And now Jason's locked in again...

Girl, it was almost painful to read this chapter. Jason needs to DO something - SOON! Run away, tell Troy or his uncle, or better yet - the police. I need to read about Jason's dad and/or Jonathan getting punished or I'll go crazy. Please don't torture him anymore!

okay, chapter 25, his dad locked him in again?? That bastard. Hm... how about this Kevin guy? We'll see more of him right? And and Troy?

I kind of like this Kevin guy even though he was acting quite harshly as well, but then again, he can't stat carring for the kids there, can he? Oh and how do these men end up working there?

I wish Jason would just run off the first chance he would get, call Kevin or something... Poor kid... And yes; he needs to eat! But I can understand that he's scared of escaping after being abused his whole life!

Will it get better for him soon?

What the ???? Locked up again, for the third time! What is Jason's dad up to??? He's going to kill the poor boy through malnutrition at this rate. If not that, then Jason will die of sheer boredom!
And.......JONATHON!!!! His father allowed Jason to be abused by Jonathon, after the promise he made, after knowing what the man did to him at the Cave? He is scum...as from now, I am taking the title 'Father' away from him. He does not deserve such an exhaulted name. From now on, he will be addressed as 'Asshole', lol.
So, Asshole is off again, and poor Jason is locked in...again. Who is going to be the one to unlock the door next time? Will it be friend, or will it be foe?
Hurry, hurry...I can't wait to find out!

oh what is going to happen now? it was very good as aways.

Jason must have needed to use the bathroom, surely? He couldn't hold it in that long? I mean, what's it been, a few days now since his dad left?
I'm dying to know what it is his father is up to...he's been so unpredictable of late. It's bound to be something shady. And what if anything happens to his dad, while Jason is locked up? Who's going to let him out and rescue him?
And Troy...he thinks Jason doesn't like him, and Jason thinks its better to let him think that way, sob.....
Mmmmm, and Kevin. He's given Jason his phone number but....Jason doesn't have a phone on him to call for help!
Ohhhhhhhhhh what a calamity!!! All this angst, all this not knowing....I love it, lol..

Chapter 24

All that this kid gets put though is just too much!!!
Too much for a 17 year old, hot, young thing, who really
needs some down time and a regular food/water source!!!

His pop is a real peach!! Unreal!!! Will he go off and just
die somewhere?!!! (Please!) Maybe he could just have a quick
heart attack!! Or maybe choke on a bite of cheeseburger!!!
Or maybe drown in some beer, when that last swig was just way too big!!!

At least Kevin cares!!! Kevin is now Jason official hero!! Except
Jason really has no concept/thought/ or hope of one, so the thought
never even occurs to the poor kid!!! I feel like yellin'...
JASON!!!!! WE'RE COMIN" FOR YOU!!! JUST HOLD ON!!!!!
We'll be right there to make sure your
shower never runs out of hot water again!!!!
JUST HOLD ON!!!!!

Thanks for gettin' me so riled up!!! It's so much fun!!!!
R

finally
hope this is symbolising a change in the story
update soon
im like addicted to this now

I do hope he will have gathered enough courage to finally get away from his truly horrid situation.
Another great chapter and thank you for the quick updates!