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April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damnit more pain
im starting to lose hope that anything would change...
anyways another interesting chapter, keep going caus i cant seem to stop reading this!
im starting to lose hope that anything would change...
anyways another interesting chapter, keep going caus i cant seem to stop reading this!
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April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Short but fantastic. Jason is finally out !
I think I shouldn't like Kevin as much as I do. He's not exactly mister good guy, but I still want him and Jason to end up together. Oh well, I'm a bit twisted like that...
I think I shouldn't like Kevin as much as I do. He's not exactly mister good guy, but I still want him and Jason to end up together. Oh well, I'm a bit twisted like that...
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April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aw man that sucks.I hope you feel better soon!!!Oh the story is great!!!!!!! update when you feel better!
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April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank fucking god. I know its not all over, but fucking hell. Thank you thank you thank you. I didn't know if i could handle jason getting hurt again.
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What can I say? I am soooo hooked on this fic. One thing, you might want to fix some of the spelling or typos, maybe have a beta. But you write such delicious sadists. As sorry as I feel for Jason, I love the sadistic villains you've created. Disappointed Jonathan is so ugly though. C'est La Vie. Anyway, keep writing!
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really am in love with this story.
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
UGH GOD. NO fucking WAY. I am so pissed. Oh god, seriously you need to update. I need to know what is going to happen. Jason and I are getting to the breaking point. I felt my heart breaking for him everytime, but this time you just completely demolished it. I am going to go crazy. God I want to kill you, but not before you finish it! lol.
-Hyde
-Hyde
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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh on, not jon again, what ever shall we do? but just grin and bare it :P lol. . . .
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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've fallen terribly behind from reading this story, just finished chapter 18, you update so quickly :) and I have been busy...
Anyway, I don't like Troy, he shouldn't have forced Jason to give him that handjob and I have the feeling that later it will be something more than just that. Poor Jason, he has victim written all over him and I guess that makes him easy to take advantage of.
His dad really is confusing, treating him like shit and then offering these small gestures of kindness, they are very small gestures, but still... and I think it only makes it harder for Jason, waking hope in him and then have it taken away again.
I'm also treating Jonathan's return, it would be quite unlikely indeed, if he just stopped coming over all together.
Jason does need a hug and he needs a friend, someone stronger but also someone that doesn't want anything from him, like the others.
I do like your writing and how real you make Jason's emotions! I'll catch up with the rest of the chapters soon.
-kolgrim-
Anyway, I don't like Troy, he shouldn't have forced Jason to give him that handjob and I have the feeling that later it will be something more than just that. Poor Jason, he has victim written all over him and I guess that makes him easy to take advantage of.
His dad really is confusing, treating him like shit and then offering these small gestures of kindness, they are very small gestures, but still... and I think it only makes it harder for Jason, waking hope in him and then have it taken away again.
I'm also treating Jonathan's return, it would be quite unlikely indeed, if he just stopped coming over all together.
Jason does need a hug and he needs a friend, someone stronger but also someone that doesn't want anything from him, like the others.
I do like your writing and how real you make Jason's emotions! I'll catch up with the rest of the chapters soon.
-kolgrim-
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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 25
Eeeeww!!! Jonathan again?!!! ICK!!!!!!
He is such an ugly perv!!!!! YUCK!!!
At least Jason wasn't torn up!!! And his father so sucks!!!!
A quick heart attack would be too kind!!! How about he gets
dragged by a bus for 100 meters, then dies from blood loss?!!!
Or, he gets mugged, knifed, and both femurs broken, as well as his nose!!!
Then he has a heart attack as dies!!!
Thanks for the chapter!!!
R
Eeeeww!!! Jonathan again?!!! ICK!!!!!!
He is such an ugly perv!!!!! YUCK!!!
At least Jason wasn't torn up!!! And his father so sucks!!!!
A quick heart attack would be too kind!!! How about he gets
dragged by a bus for 100 meters, then dies from blood loss?!!!
Or, he gets mugged, knifed, and both femurs broken, as well as his nose!!!
Then he has a heart attack as dies!!!
Thanks for the chapter!!!
R