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Oh wow now maybe things will get better, I hope so. It was very good!

i cannot wait for chapter 27!

That was a great chapter. I've been waiting for 25 chapters for Justin to make his escape. I'm looking forward to reading more about Kevin. I really hope Kevin is a good guy.

STILL SO GOOD! And I'm glad Jason finally caught a break! Hope you start to feel better.

I am hoping that this is the start of a better life for Jason, because fuck, the kid deserves it...
As always, as a reader you are drawn into your story and the characters in a way that few can.
A.k.a. I freakin' love your story!

Yay, Jason has finally ran away. I still think Troy would have helped though, if only Jason would have trusted him enough to tell him whats been going on. This Kevin just sounds too good to be true. If he feels sorry for Jason, and Tristan, then why is he working at a place like the Cave in the first place. Unless he's an undercover cop or social worker? But then if that were the case, he would have had the place shut down ages ago. Ohhhh, he is such an enigma. I can't understand his character at all.....

All I'm hoping, is that the 'asshole', or Jonathan, don't get their hands back on the poor boy.

Chapter 26

I hope Jason left the hot water running!!!
That poor kid is unperpared for everthing and he's so run down!!!!
Thank you for finally having something positive happen to this kid!!!
A what of the startling blue eyes he encountered on the stairs with Benton?!
I'll wait to see if anything develops!!!!!!

Thanks,
R

GREAT GREAT GREAT update!!! I loved it!! It was time that he got out of that Hell Hole (no matter how hard it was)!!! :p

...But I wonder, when Jason sees Kevin angry, he automatically thinks that it's his fault, that he did something wrong to anger him... but I think that in moments like this, the man is actually angry at the ones who hurted him! And Jason, he doesn't see that because all the people he ever knew were ONLY good at hurting him and making him miserable!! ;;

So in the end, it's pretty normal that Jason doesn't think otherwise of Kevin... *sniff* X____X

Man, @___@ I hope I explained myself right! >_< I don't even know if this is the case, but I do hope it's something like that... I don't want Kevin to hurt Jason! He better help the poor kid!!

Anyways,thanks for the quick update!!! *hugs* I can honestly say that I can't wait to read more!!! XD :D

Sorry for only reviewing now, I have read the last couple of updates. Geez, you put your characters through the paces, don't you. Glad Jason finally go the nerve to leave. Now let's just hope that Kevin is an okay dude, and doesn't put jason to work in the Cave or something. Levely writing, nice story.

Thanks for the new chapter, it was exiting. Finaly a new turn in the story - love it. Can't wait how things are ging to work out with K.
Poor J. really can't survive on his own, no wonder he'd needed so long before daring to run away.

I noticed some logical mistakes in the latest chapter:

J.'s window is nailed shut because one night it was left open and the rain had been so strong, his room was practically flooding. Because there is a brick wall at the other side of the street I don't think, that something like that is possible - the rain can't fall in the right angle (hope you now what I meen, my english isn't good enough to express it propperly)

J. uses the phone-booth reciver, while sitting on the floor. I think that's not possible in the most booths, because the cord is too short. It's not very probable for him to do so, but it might be possible. But I believe that it's definatly impossible for the reciver to bang on the ground, when J. drops it.

Also phone-booth doors don't open to the inside. You always have to pull them open (not like K. did), because of the limited space inside.

Pleas don't take this the wrong way.
I love your writing. Your are really great at describing states of mind and human behavior. The way you create atmosphere is great, too. The plot is also awsom... Pleas update soon. :)