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for Pain and.. pain?

by traxie

person chart451
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to hear Kevin's story!!
person chart451
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. I hope Kevin turns out to be a good guy. Any chance he could be an undercover cop?
person Mitts
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh (tearing at hair in utter confusion) I just don't know what to make of Kevin. He seems so nice, so sweet...What is this outward show of affection hiding? Does he like Jason? Or has he yet to reveal his true colours?
Only time will tell I guess...
person Ray
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I... love Kevin. *_* so much.
person Infek
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I knew Kevin was one of the good guys. =) Please let this be the start of a new and better life for Jason. It's heartwrenching to read what he has been through...
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I’m so glad Jason got away, and that Kevin is helping him. But I have to say I’m really confused about Kevin’s behavior. After all he did nothing before to help and let’s not forget Tristan a small boy being used as a whore and Kevin is doing nothing about it. How can you care for someone and do nothing about the abuse? Is he really feeling guilty and ashamed for his part in the cave? He still has a lot to do to be able to redeem himself, so my feelings on Kevin is on the cold side. Jason is right not to be too trusting, but right now Kevin is all he has and I hope that Kevin’s intentions is to help and not allow Jason to be hurt again. Damn I can’t wait to see happens next. I look forward to when all the cruel bastards pay for what they have done to these kids. I want them to hurt and suffer more then Jason did, all of them. That being said this is a damn good story.
Jewel
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just feel so sorry for Jason. Poor baby.

KD
person Pierette
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I so love this story! It's heartbreaking how much Jason likes the fluffines of the towl and blanket. It's great that he ended up at Kevins place - the kid deserved some kindness. Hope there is a happy end in store for him.
Could read this for ages but I'm looking forward to Nemo too - liked the first chapter.

Get well soon!:)

person Rosei
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 27

I don't know!!!! I think this story's got another
27 or so, chapters to go!!!! HA!! I'll never get enough of this kid!!

Thank goodness for Kevin!! It's gonna take awhile for JAson to chill
but I think he can do it!!!! Hope your feeling better!!

Thanks,
R
person memorietrail
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes it was great, so happy to see things getting better. So what happens next? more please!