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Yey, finaly!:)))Thank you.
Relived, that they'r not going to have sex. Sad that Kevin is probably going to jail.
I have to say, that I find it a bit strange, that he could work at the Cave for so long without informing the police about what was heppening there. Doing it right the day ha found out would have been more likely in my opinion, but never mind - still love this story.
I can't wait to find out, what is going to happen with Jason once he's sepperated with Kevin. I'm also looking forward to meet Troy + Ucle again. I made up my mind, pleas make it a looong story - I love Jason too much, Nemo can wait:)

Greatings

Damn, I liked the idea of Jason and Kevin together. But it's your story and I'm sure it'll be great either way. Although, I sincerely don't like Troy. Not because of the forced handjob but he's far too naive and immature for Jason. He just feels a little weak of character... I like Benton and when I first started reading your story, I thought there might be room for something between him and Jason but I suppose it would be awkward after the Troy thing. So maybe another character? I guess I'll just see where you'll take us. I'm going to take a wild guess though, is Jason going to be living with Troy and Benton?
Great chapter by the way. You made me very nervous for Kevin. I wish Jason could be a little more comfortable around him...

Aw man... i didn't mind that Kevin and Jason aren't gonna have sex or something but sure had hoped they could end up together. Sad that Kevin is gonna be locked up after the raid.... Poor Jason *cry* and he had at least trusted Kevin too.... Update soon please~~~~~

Hm. While the story is full of yaoi-cliches and some down right sad and disgusting moments. I can at least say that it has kept me reading. I wouldn't have read all 30 chapters if there wasn't something to keep me interested. I normally can't stand yaoi. In fact I try to avoid it all together. Not because of homosexual content(being a gay male myself..obviously its not homophobia) but because most yaoi that I have read is just the same thing. All cliche stereotypes that are degrading. And most are written 13-15 year old fangirls over-compensating for their lack of "man", or expressing their teenage angst. Whatever you're doing it's working. Please right more. And quickly. :)

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Sincerely,
Austin

i really, really enjoy this story!
if you were to do a sequel, what would it be about?

i think you should make it a long story, lol.

Yey, 1st of may tomorrow! Can't take long anymore till the next chapter! - I have withdrawals you see:)))

One more thing - I sincirely hope there's NOT going to be any sexual interaction between Kevin and Jason! This is one of the more realistic abuse-stroys so far. It seems Kevin has lost his family - guess he could become Jasons fosterfather ore something like that and the last thing Jason need is to be jumped by another guy!

Yea...see....this chapter just reinforces in my mind what I keep seeing...Kevin=Steady father figure. I think Kevin can help Jason out alot. Jasons going to need some major therapy someday...yikes.

Wonderful chapter! A pity Kevin doesn't want our cute little role character to kiss him... I want them to get together! >__<

Yes, so good to see more.It was very good .