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for Pain and.. pain?

by traxie

person Heart
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please put a new chapter up soon.

This story is really good.

You did a wonderful job.
person fan boy of legendary fics
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SQWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!Im so excited to wat wil hapen next!!!!!keep up the AMAZING work.
person Mitts
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So, Jason is going to be going to a foster home. Lets hope its a good one. But, what about Tristan, and Kevin?
And what of Jonathan, and of Jason's father? Oh, and Troy even...will we be hearing any more about him?
This all seems to be going to nicely so far...there must be some hiccup along the way somewhere....
person Pierette
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter!It's really great how continuos you'r posting! I like the compromise of you writing on both stories.
Wonder what the foster family's gonna be like. Poor Kevin, hope he's gonna be fine!
I'm soo addicted, pleas update soon, or poste the second chapter of Nemo - I'm shure it'll be great, too.
person Pierette
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter!It's really great how continuos you'r posting! I like the compromise of you writing on both stories.
Wonder what the foster family's gonna be like. Poor Kevin, hope he's gonna be fine!
I'm soo addicted, pleas update soon, or poste the second chapter of Nemo - I'm shure it'll be great, too.
person Saminada
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I will GLADLY make your day since u obviously just made mine!!! :D LOL

I really liked the update! Tho I'm sad for Jason that he has to be placed with a new family...
Well, hopefully, that will be his chance for a new beginning! And that he will find someone that respects and helps him! ^_____^

Anyways, I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next! :D

Thanks alot for the update! *hugs tight* lol ^^
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God damnit. You made me fucking cry again. I hate you, you bitch. Please keep writing. Please?
person Anon
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great as usual! Keep writing, I'm totally addicted. And also, I vote that you finish this story and then write a sequel!!!
person Mitts
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, poor Kevin. So that's why he's been so nice to Tristan. Sob. Now I feel bad for having doubted him. But....he's right. He should have said or done something about the Cave a long time ago. Not only would it have saved Jason from Jonathans rape, it would also have helped saved Tristan!

Mmmm, is this Cody going to be nice?

Oh, but....if the Cave DOES get raided....what of Tristan then? Maybe him and Jason could end up in the same foster home? That would be good, lol.
person Infek
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kevin is going to let himself get arrested? I don't even want to imagine Jason in foster-care...

Thank you for the chapter!