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c.48

Jason sure is daring. going out on his own.... if i were him, i'd stay in that place for a good long time till they chased me out!

c. 49.

omg. This is great! Jason's like, happy about his arrangements for once! Kevin found him!!! Yay!!! This is just great man... I hope that ontop of schooling, Jason would pick up some form of self defence too, then he can kick the bad guys ass. :D

c. 34.

I'm dragging myself away from the story to review.
It's just that. the moment JAson ran away. and everythign else, I couldn't stop! CHANGE was finally occurring to Jason's poor sad life!
But now a bully in the foster home... damn damn. nothing can be perfect can it.?

c. 37

well well well... this is some unexpected development i guess... but it's a good thing Chris is not the 'bad guy' anymore? sorta?

but hold up..

WHAT OF THAT NOTE?! HOW COME NOTHING'S BEING DONE ABOUT IT?! WHY DIDN'T JASON TELL SOMEONE!!!! argh.......

chap 24.

What is going on eh... I'm glad he's out of the Cave... but at home, and like this... I'm just glad that the-neighbour-dude is out of the picture. someone who doesn't think or notice much about Jason's obvious situation is an idiot and of useless help to Jason.

And now... he's locked up in his room. man....

Traxie. this story has a weird plot and I don't know the objective...
but it sure has ANGST. and a good whopping shit load of it. Why is this NOT in the ANGST section?
Anyway. It's good. it churns the angst muse in me. but it's weird. but I still read it.... huh.

*keeps on reading*

- nekoii

I had been looking for a longer angsty story dealing with child abuse and I was happy to stumble upon this. Read it almost non-stop for the last 2 days :P

this story was soo good >__< I think Jason deserved the happiness he suffer to much pain TT^TT and when he and chris was together it waa sooo cute I loved to read it when they were kind to each other
and well I've read forgotten too your characters are suffer too much but they aren't like each other ( maybe physically they look alike but not in the Mind ) and that's very goood

over bering older siblings are a pain in the ass (tho in this case its not the real pain just im going to preach at you kind lol) a past like that is very hard to over come some heal faster while others heal slower i for one know that pain all to well and while i have healed some what i still have the festering wonds on my soul and am trying to heal them i love reading tales like this just to see if the auther knows what they are writing about and you do know and im glad i found you and hope to read many more things from you soon

omgoshee! i loooooooooooved it. i love chris. and i actually liked how the dad didn't get caught.

<33333 hopefully i'll learn how to use this site and find more of your stories XP if you have more

i loved it, though i'll be honest i did tear up a little from how poorly treated jason got treated but at least him and chris are happy in the end.