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What a turn of events! Every new sentence seemed to bring new possiblity for Jason, without you ever really spilling the beans. ^_^

I can't wait till the next chapter.

Okay so now I'm worried. Is this a good thing or not? It was great as always and hope to see more soon.

*crying* I thought you had left us. . , but your back! now im happy!!yay!!!

this chapter was great...just curious as to wheather jason will have to go to school since he dropped out and all (which im not entirely sure when he did drop out)

the wait is sooooo worth it. i love this story so much and will be so sad when it's completed. :(

If Christopher turns out to as much a douche as every other male in this story, I'm done with it. The pain and suffering of the protagonist is too much. I know that is the title of the story, but sheesh! The reader needs some down time. The continuous tension is completely unnerving. Many times I thought I was going to give up reading this. I thought, "just kill the kid already and put us out of our misery." (Couldn't bare to watch the movie Misery either.) It is well written, but it is over the top angsty. We need something happy to happen to give us some relief. And the creepiness of the adults - Dad, Jonathan, Cave guy, Kevin at first, Kevin's Cop friend - is just too much. Give us a break! Not all adult males are pedophiles. Please don't make the protagonist go from the frying pan into the fire in this foster home. The pain has to end sometime, doesn't it? Oh, and Jonathan needs to die a slow painful death, like from the ebola virus or something. Please show us something about Jason that proves he is not the weak victim you continue to paint him. Why should we like him? Why should we care what happens to him? So he took care of that kid in the Cave. What else? Show us these things in your future chapters.

Whew! Sorry I'm ranting so. I think I'm PMSing and need some light romance to read right now. Definitely picked the wrong story to read if that is the case.

Dammit, your story hypnotized me and I just had to keep reading even though it was just pain, pain and even more pain. Over the course of the chapters you slowly begin to realize how deeply fucked up Jason really is mentally. I cheered when he finally decided to run, and am now hoping for sweet revenge on his part. I'm seriously hoping Jason will at some point go all "Sleepers" on his tormentors, maybe after a few years when he's had time to heal up a bit and get a little bigger..
Btw, Jason and Tristan's relationship reminded me a little bit of Lilja and Volodja from the movie Lilja 4-ever.

you planed on updating any time soon?;-)

There's something about this story that I love and hate at the same time. Its the content and not you as a writer. It's like I hate the stuff that is happening but I can't stop reading because I need to know what happens and Jason is just so lovable too bad not many people in the story can see that. So I guess it's 'the moth to a flame' effect or something.

Besides that let me commend you of your excellent skills as a writer because if a story that is meant to evoke emotion does evoke emotion from the reader then you've done your job. I love the lovable characters and hate the hatable ones and all the ones inbetween. Please Keep up the good work.

Now to spew like a true fan.... I absolutely hate Jonathan and I can't wait till they can find him and lock him away for ever, if they do that is... Troy lost my favor and Benton the uncle im not sure what to think of him. Then there's Kevin *sigh* I like him and it sucks that he has to go to jail but I understand why. Jason never seems to catch a break no matter what happens. *sigh* You know I think Jason needs a few women in his life maybe then none of this would happen or would stop happening... I don't know.

Foster Care.... a breeding ground for possibilities with that one and Jonathan hasn't shown up for a while so all I can think is that he's gonna pop his ugly little head up somewhere. I've been reading this story for a while so I apologize that I haven't reviewed until now, I should write more. I'm rambling so I'll go. Keep up the awesome job and I can't wait until you update again.

Peace ^_^

OMG! I love this story!! I just read from chapter 9 to 31 in 2 days... with lots of interruptions >.> But I love you'r story and its kind of interesting to me. Jason acts JUST like my friend and I made her start reading this because it's so uncanny! Well, I can't wait for your next chapter and, after this one, all my reviews will(hopefully) be critiques. So I can help you... I <3 to help. Update soon!

Love~
F-J