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for Pain and.. pain?

by traxie

person wynja
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is one of my all times favs! Just wanted to let you know, sorry I haven't anything constructive to add... I liked this chapter but for some odd reason I don't trust Ron... It's just these little things, and I don't KNOW if they are intentional or if I'm just starting to get as paranoid as Jason... maybe I am... I'm dying to find out!
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chirs is a bastard... A dirty low life that has no idea what Jason has been through so he could have cut him some slack but no he had to be the immature loser that he is. Where are the good times? I'm hoping that Kevin doesn't get in too much trouble and that Tristan is ok. His dad missing? that only spells bad news and come on out Jonathan I know ur out there..... lol jk Well I'm done rambling. Another great chapter Keep up the good work and please update soon.
Peace ^_^
person Infek
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's a relief you put at the top of the chapter that things will get better for Jason because I was starting to fear as this chapter reached its end.

This story reads like a book and I love it.
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can i punch Chris??? I really wanna do it. XD
person Jensie
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O_O'....so much for Chris dang....oh and Jason you need to take the kick me shirt off already cause holy cow....

I'm not EVEN going to attempt any guesses this time and just hope you update soon.
person TB
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why?! Why must there always be someone to threaten the poor little fella? Jeez, give him a rest...

Thank you for that chapter, though. Must be a bitch to write like this. No solution in sight?
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I want to KILL Chris! That green booger-haired boy makes me so mad!!!!! >< lmao Awesome update mate! You write these characters so realistically! I can't ever keep a character shy and scared all the time like you have in this story! Brilliant, simply brilliant ^_^
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I .... AM .... GOING TO KILL ... CHRIS
person fan boi of legendary fics
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh poor jason!why doesn't jason be friends with chris?anyway absolutely perfect job!!! oh would it be possible to have jason be with that one boy who was fuckbuddies like with him when he was in the apartment?
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I really don't like Chris. I don't care what he has been through...I want to punch him, as if J hasn't been through enough. I thought maybe this place would be good for Jason but now I'm not so sure. Rose seems nice, I can't get a handle on Ron yet. But I really hope he gets to see Tristan and Kevin soon.