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by traxie

person Rosei
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG Traxie!!! You have a gift!!!! A gift of leaving Jason in a lurch!!!!!
But, thanks for everything decent you've given to him including a bed, food, & sleep!!

Thanks,
R
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh... My... God! Im so happy that Chris isnt a total douche. Thank you for doing that. I dont think i could have lived with myself if he stayed that way. But I love his character now too. And it made me both sad and angry that he couldnt see Tristan. *tear/punch* ,^.^ I cant wait for your next chapter!! You dont know how addicted I am to this story. Its practically crack. Anyway! I love you and your amazing story-writing skills!! See you next chapter!

Curiously yours,
~F-J
person mw0627
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have seen this story for a long time, the summary, and honestly It didn't catch my attention, but I was bored and I decided what the hell i'll try it. So I started while it was at 35 chapters, and read straight through for hours straight until I had read all you have. This was a wonderful story, full of detail and unlike most stories you see I couldn't find any real errors anywhere, you did a good job editing it. If this was in a store I would definatly buy it as a book. I hope to see an update soon. Poor Jason, I want to see him with Kevin, not sure who he might end up with at this point though. Just wanted to say how much I loved your story.
person Saminada
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! another great update! LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED it! *grins*

Tho Jason choses a wrong time to act tough! It got him in alot of trouble! .__. Poor guy! He's pretty confused! ;;

LOL I hope Chris stays the way he's been acting after their fight! He BETTER not cause trouble, in any shape or form, to Jason again! grr :D
I like that he lied about Jason hitting him a second time! ...maybe I could give him another chance... :D hihi

Anyways, THANKS ALOT FOR THE UPDATE!!!! ^_____________^ And Happy (late) Birthday!!!! :DD *huggles x3*
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok so I don't exactly hate Chris anymore but I still don't exactly trust him. See a few women in Jason's life did help him out a bit, lol. Oh and I can't wait till Jason can meet Tristan again. I liked it great chapter, keep up the great work. Please update soon.
Peace ^_^

P.S.
Happy Birthday!!! Hope it's a good one ^_~
person navajo
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter....i love that chris is having a change of heart...well somewhat change of heart anyway and that jason got his bunny back, although i sure chris will be more than a lil curious about it :P
person CJ
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HAPPY DIRTHDAY! and YAY For NEW CHAPTER! I hope the next one comes soon...and WOOt progress on jason and chris! poor jason though = ( i'm glad chris feels bad! i knew wasn't really a bad guy! yay! i'm happy! and i can't wait to see tristan!
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Happy birthday!!!!!
Nice update.
person Pierette
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Happy birthday!

Like the development between Chris and Jason. Bet Chris considers it super cool,that Jason nows a detective:) Hope the'll become friends soon. Will we meet Kevin soon again?
Pleas put up the next chapter soon! You wrote you've got it ready...

person Elin
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yessss, I like it better now, Jason is finally beginning to show some real character again! Great work on your last chapter, and I think there's a real possibility of a nice NORMAL friendship between Jason and Chris. Keep going, and happy birthday!