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i love you long time. :) ahah i'm sorry i just want an update.

Great new chapter, I look forward to another when you get a chance to post.

Thanks for the new chapter, great as allways. Jason and Chris are really sweet together. Seems natural that Ron has some concerns about them getting intimate, knowing Jasons background... I'm soo sad, that we'll probalbly have to wait more than two weeks for the next chapter:(( I know it can't be helped, but still:(( (Yes, I whine a lot). Love this story.

Oh that was very good and sweet at the end. I do want more.

Too bad about the laptop, but I'm glad you've found a way to update! I like the way the story is progressing, the slow character development is good. Now I'm just waiting for the bad guys to get their just deserts. Time for Jason to learn some self defense maybe? Or get a gun =).

I really enjoyed this chapter. I feel so bad for Jason, especially when he has nightmares. I wonder who wrote that letter to him. If Jonathan is after him, I wonder how far he will go to get him.
Sorry about your computer problems. But thanks for updating when you can. You rock!

I think this is the first time I've left a review for this story and I should have done it earlier. Honestly, it started out a little bit odd for me... probably just a personal thing I guess but it was just TOO extreme with the abuse Jason was taking. So bad that it just made it unbelievable for me. But I love, love, love how the story has turned out and can't wait to read more about Jason... and Chris. :) I hope a happy ending is in store for them.

Aw, Jason is actually falling in love? Or at least feeling some sort of healthy emotion for another person.
I'm glad he and Tristian finally got to meet, even though the meeting was bitter sweet. I'm sure it won't be the last he'll see of the young boy though.
But now my mind begins to worry. Jason is happy, finding new feelings with Chris, settling down nicely. But....there is still that threat of the unsigned letter. Will this person wreak havoc in Jason's quiet life? What's going to happen? Ohhhh can't wait to find out.

Ok, let me know if you want me to stop pointing out your errors. I only do it because I love your story.
Until then, here's the one's I spotted for this chapter.....


When (my) meeting with Tristan came to an end,

“Christopher dear, would you mind?” Rose asked from the door and (I) buried my face back into the pillow

“Jason?” She asked gently and (I) turned around slowly

You were mean to me because you wanted to see if I’d stand up for myself(?)” **If it were me, I would put a question mark here, rather than a full stop**

A moment later Nicole, who had died (dyed) her hair black

Kiss Jason. We’re trying to figure out if he’s gay or not.” Chris said and I blushed crimson read. (red)

I suddenly found my lap full of (a) certain green haired boy.

It just got overwhelming to finally for someone to say it out loud. **This sentence doesn't read right. Perhaps, try it like this......It just got overwhelming to finally hear someone say it out loud

and I blushed for what felt like the thousand(th) time in just today.

He was looking very contempt (content)

I might as well seize the opportunity and write on (in) my journal

You’re still trash(ing) in your sleep though.” Chris said


Whoo hoo. There you go. All done! Lol.

OOOH!!! I smell ACTION!! WOOT!! So... is there gonna be any Jason/Chris fluff in the next chapter?? There should be... I hope so. That or have the other guy come back... I cant remember his name!! NOOO! I think it was Thomas... I feel so unworthy. But I still love your story more than sleep. Honest. It's 6 am and I havent slept. I love you.

Curiously Yours,
~F-J

I really liked your story and in reality have been following it for a really long time. I like the development of Chris and Jason, btw. I was just hoping that you would make Chris just a tad bit possessive and maybe have Jason be really good at something so that he has a job in his later life. Thanks, and UPDATE SOON, YA HEAR?