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for Pain and.. pain?

by traxie

person lele
schedule January 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! Tristan is back, and J had a chance to see him. I understand now why he wasn't telling his name, poor baby. Chris is still untrustworthy to me. He seems sincere with helping with the nightmares, but now he won't get out. Don't like that. As always an outstanding job with such an awesome story.
person Mightmaeve
schedule April 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! Amazing! My heart was in my throat for the entire story! Very powerful and very important story! There were a few spelling and grammar errors--nothing big--and a few itsy-bitsy plot holes, but overwhelmingly brilliant! Thank you for writing and sharing! Unforgettable!
person SunaoTsuji
schedule September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
intrestingly i was able to put this story on a semi-marathon read between my sick hrs and sleep with my free hours to read. beautifully written and the story wasn't rushed. i adore the way the ending had come to a close.i love happy endings. thanks so much for sharing this and i hope to find more time to read your other stories. greatly appreciate your hard work and keep up the great work!
person KDeheart
schedule September 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've read this several times now and I still think this is one of the better stories out there. I'm talking about professionally edited and published books also, not just free slash.
person Sarah
schedule September 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I had read your story "Forgotten" and was all caught up when I decided to check out your previous works. I must say that I am very impressed at how much you've improved over the years. Pain and Pain kept me coming back for more and I even stayed up until 2am on the first day, finishing about 30 chapters. I loved everything about this story and I kept wishing it would just go on, but I knew that could never happen. There was only so much that could happen to Jason.

I just wanted to let you know that I am really proud of you and you inspire me to continue writing as well. Thank you for posting up such a lovely story and I can't wait to see how Forgotten turns out.

Keep writing! :D
person Faithsins
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved it to the very end <3 Keep up the good work :)
schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a great story. I hope Tristan gets his own story one day^^
schedule May 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
c.43

seeing the number of chapters... i just knew some shit had to come splattering out. JAson got kidnapped . aw man. SOMEONE QUICKLY RESCUE HIM DAMNIT!
schedule May 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chap 44.

What the BLOODY hell took the police and foster care so SHIT long to DO NOTHING!
JAson had to run away, ON HIS OWN! I'm so mad at the police, at Cody, at their USELESSNESS!
man!!! Thank god Jason managed to get away at the nick of time! thank god!
schedule May 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
c.46.

I honestly don't know how they can just make people like Jason LEAVE and go to some other half-way home, which sounds less safe, a place where he can get kidnapped again... *sighs*