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for Pain and.. pain?

by traxie

person Pierette
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you:)) Cute the three of them together. I'm so curious what the note is all about.
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I hate to hear this story is coming to an end, but I guess it couldn't keep going forever. But at least there are a few more chapters to go. I really wonder what has got Jason so ill. Really good chapter. I love it when you update. Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is one of my most favorite stories.. Each time i see an update i do the happy dance.. Your writting just puts me there and i'm so glad you are sharing it !!
person Pierette
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi Trexie,

I wonder if we coul get a new chappie soon? It would definetly make my day, since I border on depression because of all the stuff I got to do for my studies:(

Love your work
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I KNEW IT!!!! XD I knew it was gonna be pink! HA! lol Any guy who looks good in pink is a keeper in my book :P
Hehe LOVED this update mate ^^ I'm so glad that Jason was finally able to tell someone about what happened in his past, and that it was Chris! Oh, and I'm soooo HAPPY that he and Chirs have so much in common :) Makes me extremely giddy! lol
Update whenever you're able mate ^_^
person Ayvee
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absoloutly love love love this story!!! I'm especially loving Jason living in the foster home and his relationship with Chris. It's nice to see him happy (or happyish...) and coping with this new situation. But I am also excited about maybe some more angst happening, like Jonathan showing up (hint hint)
anyways, cant wait to hear more!
~Ayvee
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow pink. I wasn't expecting that. That's interesting, I wonder how Rose and Ron are going to take that...LOL...Jason is to adorable for his own good. I just wanna wrap him up and hug him. He's been through so much and now he's sick. I just have a feeling that this illness is something serious...At least he gets to see Tristan! I'm excited for their visit. I hope Jason is up for it. Please update soon. I have missed this story so much!!!!
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This chapter was everything I needed it to be and MORE! You captivate me with your story. Honestly, I am putty in your hands. 0.0 And I dont say that to everyone! This was a great chapter. I was wondering how long the green tint was gonna last before it all faded out... Guess Ill never know. ^.^ But I cant help but think of the crap Chris is gonna get at school now for his pink hair... *shudder* Well since this was so good, I'll have to give you more cookies! *runs forward and shoves a box of cookies at your feet and runs back*

Enjoy!(write fast),
~F-J
person wynja
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still love this story! Sorry if I haven't reviewed last chapter, I usually print them and sometimes I forget the feedback... bad me... makes me feel guilty... Anyway, loved this chap and it was really moving! As everything is going so well, I can't help but think that something bad will happen soon... All the best! *waves over towards Finland from Sweden*
person Pierette
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yey, thanks for the new chapter!
Hope youre move wasn't too stressy.
I love Chris and Jason together and it's great to see Jason experience some good times. Good they have talked about their pasts. They fit together really well.
Your a great writer, can't wait for more.