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I swear, this story keeps on putting me on the verge of tears!
These people are so...so....ARGH!!!
there isn't a word bad enough to describe them!
Everyone needs to die(except a select few)!
*wipes tears and continues reading*

Hope you had a great time on your weekend away....

Patiently waiting for the next update.

That was so funny, even Tristan questioned Chris's pink hair, lol.
What was the meaning of all that which Cody was speaking of? Was it really Jason's dad withdrawing the money, or has something dire happened to him and hey...if there IS any money in his dads account, it should go to Jason, he earned it!
Still waiting with baited breath to find out just who it was sent that note. I've got my bets banked on it being Jonathan.

Here's a couple of things you might want to look at....

I was behaving as unpredictably as dad; something that had scared me the most about the man and *I* (Don't need this 'I' in here) now I was like him.

I was out of the door before he could say anything and ran along the corridor before bouncing down the stairs *with* (taking) two at a time.

She smiled when she saw us piled up on the bed (and) when we got up, (she) came to feel my forehead.

“So you can charge him for drugs?” I muttered *a* (the) question and hunched my shoulders.

I got on my feet shakily, rinsed my mouth under the *tab* (tap)


Excellent reading as always....Hope the next chapter comes out soon.

Great chapter. I'm so happy Chris and Tristan like each other. Thanks for the update.

Lovely fluffy chapter... I can really feel the pain from Tristan leaving... I'm always looking forward to your updates, but... how to explain... hmmm... well, you know how storylines has different parts like introduction, building suspense, the point of no return and so on? Well, this story hit the "point of no return" like the "point of action" when the club was closed down and he was free, and after that there was the sad/sary but eventually fluffy chapters of the foster-family, but then the letter came, starting a whole NEW suspence-building.... it's great (although this is like reading the sequel to the story) but I hope you have planned to build the suspence further soon and make something (either really bad or really good) happen to get some more action int the story... I know you wrote somewhere that you are just writing this more or less unplanned, and that is OK, so I hope you aren't angry with me now... it's not like this is BORING, I appriciate that the relationship is blossoming and everything, things are happening, but that letter... it just NEEDS to happen something regarding that soon, right?
All the best!
/Wynja

Love it! Really loving the relationship with Chris. Thanks for the update, hope to read more soon...
~Ayvee

I am absolutely in love with this story.
Please continue on.
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Oh my, I can't stop thinking about poor little Tristan and even Troy! I wonder if they will ever meet again. . .

Awww, thats so sad! Poor Triston, I wish they could all live together. Im glad the story's gonna be so long, Im not looking forward to it ending. Great chapter, update soon please!!!

Amazing! As usual! I basically LOVE Chris' hair color. Pink... hehe... Love Chris in general. I Just with JASON WOULD SHOW THE NOTE TO SOMEONE ELSE!!!! Someone needs to know. I personally think its Jonathan... But im just another reader. NO IDEA! It is a little sad that its going to end though... I think im gonna cry when the 50'th chapter comes out... most definately. Please keep up the FANTASTIC work and Update soon.

Craving Your Writing,
~F-J

Bright pink hair! From one extreme to another. I love Chris, lol. And I must admit, I really, really loved the Teddy/Rabbit episode. That was so charmingly done. The gift of a little sweater, the christening of Bunny, the way Jason tucked both toys up on the pillow, drawing the blankets over them, depicting him and Chris....Great big 'awwws' were wrung from me as I was reading all that, lol.

I'm glad Jason and Chris finally got to talk about their lives to each other. That is definately a big step in their growning relationship. It sort of makes them even more perfect for each other, seeing as how they can each sympathise with one another.

Here's a few things you might want to re-look at....

’She chose him and decided that her marriage would work if I *wouldn’t live* (wasn't living) with them.

I just.. haven’t gotten *into*(round to) doing it.”

“I’m just going downstairs, stop looking (at) me like that!

I looked at his head and grinned at (the) shower cap he had on.

That's it! Not a lot, were there? lol. Now I just have to wait and see if Jason is well enough to be allowed to see Tristan, and to find out if Ron and Rose do make Chris re-dye his hair lol....