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for Pain and.. pain?

by traxie

schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, the angst and pain is back! ::dances:: Uh, I mean, oh no! Whatever will happen to our plucky young hero?
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, poor Jason. Thanks for the update! I can't wait for more... please update soon, I'm addicted!
person Dreamwritter
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. Its got a great story lines and your characters are so believably real, i almost started crying a few times.
Please update as soon as you can, can't wait to read more!!!!!!
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG!! I LOVE this story!! Seriously, Im gonna cry when you end it. Big, fat, remorse riddled tears!! But its ok. Ill get over it some day... as long as you update soon... just to save us readers some pain. LOVE!! *throws cookie at head*

Giving Motivation,
~F-J
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD Poor Jason, sex talk with adults are always embarassing, and for Jason it could only be much MORE so. But I'm so glad he's losing his fear of being touched ^_^ It shows how comfortable he's becoming in his new home. AWESOME chappy mate :) I really hope Jonathon sends another note though >< It freaks me out that he could destroy the comfort Jason is feeling right now! GAH!!! lol
person SODA
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That would be soooo mortifiying if my mom ever caught me doing any of that, I can see why Jason would have nightmares. Great chapter, update soon please!!!
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's great to read that Jason is starting to come out of his shell a little. Chris is actually good for him. Although I kinda wanted Jason to end up with Kevin, now I think Chris might be a better fit for him. I think Kevin would make an excellent big brother for Jason. I hope he comes around soon.
So when Jason was sick, he had the stomach flu? That makes since. I was afraid it was something more, but I guess it wasn't.
I hope Jason decides to tell someone about the notes he has been receiving, someone other than Chris. Especially before something bad happens.
Great chapter, can't wait for your update...I hope it's soon!
person Nargle
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very awesome. I am happy that you made Chris so loveable.
person Emma-Jane
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i sooo love the story it is grt i love reading it xx
person Jackie
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome story, even though I really hate child abuse and prostitution your stroy is a good read, Chris and Jason are so cute togeather. Are you going to update soon? ^-^