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WOW! I mean... wow! Wonderful chapter... you have really made me fear the name Jonathan with this story... I have always thought it was kinda soft and pretty, but DAMN... not gonna name any kids of mine Jonathan anymore... *grin* AWESOME story, as always...

You have no idea how much I hate that sadistic animal Jonathan, and Jason's dad and anyone else involved with hurting the poor kid. I really hope you have something really painful planned for those bastards. Poor Jason it seems he is back where he started, in pain and agony. I know he wants to protect Chris, but he really needs to get angry again to the point of beating up that freak Jonathan. The same way he got angry when Chris took his picture away of Tristan. He needs to get crazy wild angry, Jonathan takes advantage because Jason is afraid. But if Jason just looses it and beats the crap out of him, who knows Jonathan may end up fearing him? I know I'm asking alot of Jason, he feels so helpless. But if he were to kick the beast in the balls and keep hitting until he can no longer get up, Jason will feel empowered and he may be able to get away. I hope Chris is able to get the police and find him, however I don't see that happening anytime soon. Jason has to save himself, so kick him and don't stop until you see his blood spill for a change. whew! now that I got that out of my system. I really do hope Jason does find a way to escape and get even with Jonathan for the pain and sadness he has caused him, I hope he is able to fight back when Jonathan would never expect it and beats the animal into an eternal coma. Great update and can't wait to see what happens next.
Jewel

*~dude, you're going to kill jason and your readers if you keep this up XD ha, suspense and all...i kinda had expected jason to fall back into mr. johnny's hands buuut, that was still a big "whoa" :D keep it up ~*

Yay! Your back!!!

Oh my GAWDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD, why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why ?!?!?!?!

D:


I hate Jonathon and hope he drops dead.
Why would you do that to Jason. . .again??

:[[[

Hasn't he suffered enough?

I kind of expect Jason to get raped.
Or something else to happen to him.
T.T

Damn... what can I say? That was preeeeetty stupid of him to leave alone like that! *sights*

Now mr asshole is back! And what a crazy -obsessed- son of a bitch he is!!! grrr

Nothing new there! ;;

Anyways, thanks alot for the update! *hugs* I hope Jason will be saved soon! *hugs him tight*

Oh not again. I was hoping this was a dream but I don't think so. I hope someone helps Jason soon. I don't think he can go through this again. Great chapter...I've missed this story. I can't wait for your next update!

*prepares different tortures for Jonathan*
Poor poor Jason.

Wow holy shit this story is fantastic. It's made me cry...most stories don't provoke such a strong emotion from me. I spent hours and hours, ignoring sleep (lol) to read from chapter 1 all through to the 43rd chapter. There was no way I could read this and not review.
As far as grammatical/spelling errors, there weren't many but honestly, it did not deter from how much I've enjoyed the story so far. Sorry I'm not helping with the constructive criticism. lol

You write like someone who knows the pain Jason's been through...I say that because the feelings, the fear, the pain he goes through is all too familiar for me and it's like you've conveyed it all perfectly. When I read most rape stories, they do not make me relive my own experiences, and you would think that might be a good thing, but honestly, it feels like the feelings are validated and purged at the same time.

I love Jason, what a dear, love how Chris is and Tristan is such a cutie, I'd like to see more of Tristan adjusting to normal life like Jason was. I think you've done a good job with Jonathan's characterisation; at times he is gentle and then terrifying - most real life villains are not black and white so there's another job very well done for you.

One more thing before I finish this off, I'm glad you incorporated social anxiety disorder in Jason, the panic attacks, the psychosomatic sickness he gets often is so true to anyone who has such low self-esteem and who's suffered a fraction of what he has. You have been consistent with his personality and his quirks that are not forgotten in the next chapter. Also, the fear that he is like his father is realistic.

All in all, you've done a wonderful thing with this story and I can't believe you're stopping at 50 chapters! I would absolutely love a sequel when this is done.
Sorry for such a long review but I had to write all this :)

Holy fuck. That was intense. I really can't wait to see what happens next.

Wow, this story is really deep. I've been reading it from the start and I have to say, this is impressive. The characters are so well developed. Although I have to say, I had a feeling Jonathan was coming back eventually which makes me think he's been watching Jason for a while now and waiting for the right moment to snatch him away again. He's a stalker. xD I enjoy how the story line has progressed so far. This just keeps getting better and better. Yet, I can't help but say I'm anxious to read the next chapter. ;)

Much support,


~ Solicise