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December 28, 2023 at 12:00 AM
I've come back to read your works for the first time in years. I remember the first time I read Pain, and it evoked such strong emotions. I had to come back. It's just as good as it was the first time.
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July 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
i love this, more so after Jason's life became better of course ^.^
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January 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
i really, really enjoyed this book. It was a very emotional ride, i found myself immersed in poor Jason. i was so very happy that everything was good in the end, although i would've liked a little more finality on Dad, and would've enjoyed Kevin's sex talk at the end. If the author still gets posts here (i realize this is an old book) i would like to let you know that i'd be willing to revise this for you if you'd be willing to update it. This is an AWESOME read and i'd really like to help if possible.
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October 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
oh my god this was the best story i have read in a very long time. i had actually cried in places and laughed so much in others. I absolutely loved this story thank you !!
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January 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh please, please give this kid a break. I take back every doubt I had about Chris. Hoping he saw the car tags or something to help find Jason. Can't wait to read more....kind of scared to if the ending is not good. But can't stop now. Awesome work.
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January 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yeah for Gerry!!! Finally a break. Hope the cops get Johnathan.
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January 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! Too cool. Love, love, love Kevin. Awesome Work!!!!!!!! :)
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January 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just had to stop and review on this outstanding story so far. You are doing an excellent job with your characters and no joke some chapters had me crying. Can't wait to read more. Good job.
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January 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Okay I was so hoping Jason would check a break, but the green head nut case is pissing me off!!! I would love to see Jason realize he is stronger than he thinks, and stand up for himself. I miss Kevin too. I wonder if you're going to allow Mr. Benton to adopt him, or if he'll meet up with Troy and become friends. Can't wait to read more. Outstanding job.
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January 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE LET J KICK HIS BUTT!!! I knew he was going for the journal, I was hoping J would have hide it better.