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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I haven't imagined how strange a story could be. Now, I'm wiser. :)
After the first shock, I must say that it's really interesting. I liked the third "chapter" best, especially the split peronality becoming physically "real". Actually I don't like N/C-stories to this extent; nevertheless, I think it was kind of exciting.
I advise to form from the meaning of the third chapter a whole story, but don't mix it with such strange happenings like in the second one; and the bloody mess in the first was a little icky, too. However, the third chapter holds highest potenial - in my opinion. Well, it is said from a non-fan of nauseating horror; I like more the psychotic way. :)
All in all, you should keep on writing!
And another hint: If you want more people to read your story, you should relocate it in the slash-section. Although I'am fan of AFF since a very long time, today was my first in the horror-section!
After the first shock, I must say that it's really interesting. I liked the third "chapter" best, especially the split peronality becoming physically "real". Actually I don't like N/C-stories to this extent; nevertheless, I think it was kind of exciting.
I advise to form from the meaning of the third chapter a whole story, but don't mix it with such strange happenings like in the second one; and the bloody mess in the first was a little icky, too. However, the third chapter holds highest potenial - in my opinion. Well, it is said from a non-fan of nauseating horror; I like more the psychotic way. :)
All in all, you should keep on writing!
And another hint: If you want more people to read your story, you should relocate it in the slash-section. Although I'am fan of AFF since a very long time, today was my first in the horror-section!