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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love that at the end of the chapters you are so honest to us readers. Although, as an American, I am still trying to decipher your Aussie slang. Thanks for the update, and yes, you are a bad author, now stop being the dude who holds the bone on string to lead a dog and let's get to the good smutty stuff!! Mwahahaha!! Thanks for the update.
* Neko-chan *
* Neko-chan *
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok the twins seem like they are loose party girls. Which is really unAutumny. I like the guy. NEW CHAPPIE NOW!!!! (or whenever is convenient for you)
By the way. How did you back up your music? When I try to my computer says to insert CDs until all the music is copied. Which I'm totally not doing that. It would take forever.
By the way. How did you back up your music? When I try to my computer says to insert CDs until all the music is copied. Which I'm totally not doing that. It would take forever.
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, firstly, I'm goodly :D
Secondly, I LOVE Betty Boop and also think she's cute :)
Thirdly, I likey the new characters muchly (Jackson made me laugh!) - I'd love to see Dominick get all jealous after seeing Autumn and Jackson sharing bodyy heat! Heee - hot passionate sex could ensue! :P
Love the story!
Thanks so much for sharing it :)
S
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Secondly, I LOVE Betty Boop and also think she's cute :)
Thirdly, I likey the new characters muchly (Jackson made me laugh!) - I'd love to see Dominick get all jealous after seeing Autumn and Jackson sharing bodyy heat! Heee - hot passionate sex could ensue! :P
Love the story!
Thanks so much for sharing it :)
S
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Motherfucking virus!
Does that mean we will have to wait very, very long for the next chapters?! *cries*
I liked the chapter but I missed a little action!
Maybe Dom saw them and is jealous now? *gg*
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!! :)
Does that mean we will have to wait very, very long for the next chapters?! *cries*
I liked the chapter but I missed a little action!
Maybe Dom saw them and is jealous now? *gg*
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!! :)
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I say yes to all four of your questions at the end. I think it was a good chapter short but good. You get to meet her friends and see what they are like and what she's like with them. It's just been her, the dude, and her sister basically so we got to she her interact with other people. But back to them and steamy-ness. Well I hope you update as soon as you possibly can. I really like this.
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January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Exciting if I must say so myself. I love Autumn's character becuase she's aware that she's a nerd but also that shes's a woman and she needs touch as much as the next woman. I love Dom and I would just like to put in that I am in love with a guy named Dom. Dominque to be exact. strange huh? Anyways I love both of the charas but I am really intereted in the motives and why Autumn hasn't questioned it sooner. Also I'm curious to know about the story later on. Keep writing.
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January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
if only, if only. every gurl woulg enjoy the same. im lovin this story!!!
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you made me cream my panties. Dominick is such a hottie if only he were real. And Autumn is such a cutie. Keep up the good work and in due time you will get 500 reviews. This story is sooooo good.
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I kinda agree with your wooden writing sentiment. Usually I'm glued to the screen with your writing, but this time I actually left the house and came back 5 hours later then finished the chapter.
Maybe it's because I wasn't getting the poem thing, but Dom didn't respond to Autumn's dirty little secret inquiry. That's a bit shady.
Oh and I thought the reason the story is called cherry was obvious... I suppose I'm wrong?
Maybe it's because I wasn't getting the poem thing, but Dom didn't respond to Autumn's dirty little secret inquiry. That's a bit shady.
Oh and I thought the reason the story is called cherry was obvious... I suppose I'm wrong?
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't think that the smut in this chapter was wooden, I just think it felt different than previous chapters. I liked the poem recitation -it seemed to fit- but I think that's what made it feel different. Despite Dominick's sentiments that they're in a supply closet so "how romantic can it be?" I think him reciting the poem made things less...licentious and more romantic. Also, because of the dialogue, it broke up the actual prose, which made it a little choppy...but I liked it nonetheless.
What's with Dominick not answering Autumn's questions in the beginning? He certainly managed to get out of explaining why he's doing what he's doing, hm? I like that too, though, because it makes me curious -which will make me keep reading.
Can't wait for the next chapter where, hopefully, some questions are answered, more smut ensues, and Autumn and Dom find a bed ^_^ Oh, and rambling is kind of a writer's prerogative, I feel.
What's with Dominick not answering Autumn's questions in the beginning? He certainly managed to get out of explaining why he's doing what he's doing, hm? I like that too, though, because it makes me curious -which will make me keep reading.
Can't wait for the next chapter where, hopefully, some questions are answered, more smut ensues, and Autumn and Dom find a bed ^_^ Oh, and rambling is kind of a writer's prerogative, I feel.