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Good chapter. I'm guessing Dom's sis died. So now he's drowning his sorrows in a bottle.

uh, yeah. edward's sorta creepy. nice chapter, though. i can't wait for the next one.

*squeeze you* ah you're lovely. Yes he is an ass and then I talked to him about it and he made it out to be my fault. He didn't even appologize until I told him that's why I was mad. What a jerk anyway. He would never teach me poker, he wont even teach me how to crochet a sweater and All I can do is hats. *sigh* I might want to play strip poker with his mates, some of them are hot and if might get him jealous enough to fight for me and then take me to bed and ravish me until I can't walk. Or something like that. Edward is creepy but I don't really know what he wants, and what is Gague's purpose. Maybe he's going to be the backup just in case Dom and Autumn have a fight? No I have not read any of your other stories but you know wat that's a very good idea. I think I shall do that now. And don't worry about the updates especially when you have to fight with yourself and getting disracted by hot male types. But keep writing I know I enjoy reading it.

I've checked this story each day like a milion times and you leave us hanging like that?! Stupid cliffhanger! *argh* I want to throw something, preferably you but then we would never get a new chapter so I will be nice! But only this once. Next time I won't be that nice. *gg*

It's been forever and seven days since your last update.

This is fantastic that you updated again! I also enjoyed this chapter~ You could say it was a nice break and your dialogue was not bad, a far cry from artificial if you ask me. I enjoyed the new characters as well! Nothing much to say about them since you just introduced them.

Hm~ good luck with your computer virus, I would beat the living shit out of my computer if that happened to me, but... *sighs* life just doesn't work out that way. That sucks bad all of your future chapters were deleted. Happened to me once... I cried miserably for a day, cursed myself for another day and got back to writing the damn thing, then decidedly saved the crap in three different places. ^-^'

Looking forward to the next chapter as well! Good luck!

So I have a problem. My Dom is being a total ass. He blew me off for poker. Time to up and dump him or give him another chance? The problem with my Dom is everythinng about us together is explosive, sexual, and breath stealing. I know it sounds corny and romance novelly but seriously. EXPLOSIVE. My goodness just looking at him makes my legs weak and if it's hard to concentrate when he's standing next to me it's near impossible for me to get him out of my mind when he's not. I realte to Autumn and Doms' situation and I think that's why I like this story so much. Like you said Dom is everything you would want in a man, but at the same time I'm finding out, on my end, that the dark brooding type can be a bit of a bad thing. I want so much for this to work out beacuse maybe if you write a happy ending I'll have one too. Maybe not. I know it sounds silly. Anyway. I was a bit surprised by this chapter since i hadn't read it in a couple of days I didn't really undestand what was happening. I like the friend but I could see him and the twins making decisions a little difficult in the future. Yes! SEX TIME ( besides maybe I'll score too ;) ) And I'm very glad you're back. Keep posting.

Oh oh....I like Jackson so far, but I hope that he will not become a rival for Dominick...because then I wouldn´t like him anymore! But as a friend, he´s really ok!^^

First things first, is everyone okay? Yes... well, I am... ^___^ especially with a new chapter!!! xD
Secondly, hands up if you like Betty Boop? (I think she’s cute). *raises hand*
Now, the new characters/ Autumn’s friends do we likey? *nods*
And lastly, they be having sex now? *shrug* *nods* sure?
YAY! new chapter!! >_> i'm slightly confused and missing Dom, but ^__^ YAY! NEW CHAPTER!! I like seeing more of Autumn's character and seeing how she interacts with other people... Will Dom be jealous of her interactions with Jackson?? *dundundun* Is Dom invited to Jackson's party?? Will he kidnap her from the party to have a romantic night on graduation of sex?? *is teh uber excited!~* <3 to you and your poor amnesia-ed computer... *mourns the dead chapters* oh well~ *eagerly waits for more...* .... *wags tail*

>_< why does it keep cutting me off??? >_> anywho... *eagerly awaits new chapter*... *wags tail* more more if you please~