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by LittleMissPerfect

person Primdemure
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The last scene made me want to fan myself. It's obviously too hot in that kitchen. Love your work MissMalice, I don't think I've read a story of your that I disliked yet! All the stories flow and even better there is actually a story line. Not that us readers mind reading other things as well. I can't get enough of 'Cherry'. All I can ask is that you keep it coming.
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Don't we all want Chuck Bass on a platter for any day? r is it just me.
person Anon
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what´s up with dominick??? Why is he at the party and why is he so angry?? Did something happen to him or is he angry because of jackson?? Can´t wait to read the next chapter!
person Velida
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY. Please update soon! I hope your writer's block ends really really soon because I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. Gosh Dom is so hot when he's all angry and possessive. I wonder what role Edward will play...
I can rant all day long about how amazing this story is. Props to you. How long do you intend to make this story? (I HOPE LONG.) UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON--I'm sorry I sound so.. "encouraging" ahem. : D
person maneo
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay Aussie day the best time of year to go to the foreshore det drunk and watch fireworks awesome fic by the way and it was great in the way how it was based in Australia so I didn't get confused with the schools or seasons and stuff usually I'm like "think in opposites months and man it has been hot here lately hasn't it by the way chunder means to throw up you know when the beer flows men end up throwing the guts out ^_^

Have to admit that Edward guy creeps me out sounds like a stalker to me
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i don't really understand why dom was angry. but i'm very much looking forward to the next chapter to find out
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That sucked. It was a cliffy but yeah it was good for being filled with stuff. But anyways I hope you update soon. I really want to know what happens next. So order everyone to come back.
person Anon
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh please update soon, this story has got to be one of my favourites on AFF.net and I just can't wait until I can read the next chapter!
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Edward is very weird. Is he in here just for the sake of being the creepy and, in my opinion, lecherous perv towards Autumn? Don't ask why i think that it was just a vibe I felt whenever you mention him. Oh yes, by the way Dom looks in the kitchen it is safe to say he is not very happy. Watch Out Autumn! It is going to get steamy in the kitchen! lol. Happy Aussie Day to you! I'm not Australian (would like to visit) but I share the holiday with you because it is also my birthday.
person forever his
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it's great! I really hope the next chapter won't take that long... especially after that cliffy you just left us with. I've read some of your other stories and by far this is the best and my favorite. As for Edward being creepy... not so much in my opinion, he just seems disconnected like he should be, he's an older brother that's been away, recently got out of a relationship and faced with the fact that he's getting older and his younger brother and his brother's friends aren't so young anymore. Or maybe that's just my own opinion... =). Well, can't wait for the next chapter, can't wait to see what got Dominick in such a mood... and what will resort from it. Keep it up, loving it!