rate_review Reviews

Ooooh! I love this story so far... the scene with the Neruda was one of the sexiest things I've ever read. Please update soon!!

You have more of my interest without cliff hangers. :D

But finally after long days full of waiting, you posted a new chapter.

I really like it. It was really intense.

Keep it coming!!!

Yay, you updated!! I liked this chapter, angsty Dom was very hot. ;)

I really liked Gerard Butler in Phantom, too. He's a very sexy man... and funny! Anyway, more more more!!

OMG this is such an amazing story. I anxiously check the listings every other day to see if you have updated. I love the fact that Dominick recites poetry when he is intimately touching Autumn. He is so hot. And I can totally related to Autumn, however I'm still waiting for my Dominick. I love cliffhangers so keep it up. Now for my question...Will we find out when Dominick started having feelings for Autumn and is he in love with her or does he just want to shag her senseless?
Either way...I'll be anxiously waiting for your next update...so I hope Dom and Autumn will settle down long enough to allow you to write more about them. Keep up the awesome work on this fic. :)

You were unhappy with this chapter? Hmm. I liked it. Ooo I love it when Dominick recites poetry while playing with Autumn. Lovely. So will they take it upstairs?? Please let then take it upstairs!! Australia Day never lives up to my expectations anyway so I usually just bum around that day. Well anyway Im lovin' Cherry so please give your muse a smack on the bum to keep the goodness coming. Nellie

GAH tease!
Gah! hott!!!

update please!!
you're awesome!

I know it has been WAAAAY too long since I last reviewed, and I'll have to read it again a FOURTH time to give you a proper review on my Writer's Blog.

The reason why I mention having to read it again is because every chapter immediately draws me in, and I completely lose any connection with the previous chapter. I really must commend you on your eloquence, your imagery, your firm grasp of character, your ability to pull me into the story...I could go on. This story is a commendable piece, and one that I am DEFINITELY going to keep an eye on.

Where technical details are concerned, I don't know if you received my message on LJ, but to answer your question: yes. Refer to my message there, and so we shall talk.

Keep up this splendid job! I've never been more drawn to a story like this in a very long while.

-- SFC Omicron

ooh.. we're getting to something here. i think it's sweet that he's all jealous and stuff but the 'whore' part was a little hurtful (but understandable. he was kinda tipsy, wasn't he?). please update soon. thanks.

i just found this and i love it so much dying for more. do you need me to beg? cause i can totally beg. seriously i am a master at begging....not afraid to emphasize the need to beg...PLEASE DONT MAKE ME BEG JUST LET ME READ MORE WAAAAHHHHHHHH. ok i'm done not really but i promise all hysterics will be kept on my side of the computer screen. lol but seriously you got some serious talent love your writing lots and lots and lots

great chapter...I really like how Autumn and Domic(sp?) interact with each other! cant wait to see what happens next.. hope you update soon