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Really great fic, thanks so much. Theres a typo if you wanted to know, you called Autumn April when theyre in the closet at the hospital.

I cant wait until the next chapter!!!

I am highly enjoying your story.
And chapter 11 is great so don't be so hard on yourself.
Can't wait for more

OH MY WORD. i just realized i forgot to review for last chappy... sorry! i still love this story! nothing can tear me away! xD i lurf this story... sucky that things aren't great for you in the land of oz... ^___^ as much as you didn't like this chapter, i liked it. ^__^ i liked jackson walking in... i thought that was cute... one question... key to her room? like in his house? <3 but other then that, keep it up!

Loved it! Now we are getting to the good stuff ;D. Maybe next time you should keep something of theirs to use as leverage when they decide to take off again. Well anyways I hope you update soon. Can't wait for the next chapter.

INDEED. Gerard Butler is a FINE specimen of the male species. Hahahaha! Really waiting for the (hopefully long) moment when Dom finally pops Autumn's "cherry". He deserves it hands down.
Please update soon! I want to see them go upstairs already! Shed a few clothing along the way! etc etc!

You do know that cliff hangers are evil, right?

they're just so oblivious and cute. are the bits of poetry from soneone else or are they yours?
yes Gerard Butler is very gorgeous, Aust. Day (got sun burnt) and WA daylight savings sucks.

Waaah, I loved this chapter!!^^

I liked the way you wrote this "fight" between Autumn & Dominick...that he didn´t scream at her or something like this but was calm but nevertheless upset (do you understand waht I mean?? Kind of hard to expain for me, sorry....).
And I also liked Jacksons reaction & comments when he came into the room - I really had to laugh at that...^^

Can´t wait for the next chapter!!!!!

omg how funny i love it!!

lol

and this made me feel so much better im having a crapass start to a new year :[


BUT I LVOE THIS STORY1! lol

Ooooooh the sizzle is back. lol meaning Dominick. I absolutly love his chara. I notice that you mention the smell of cinnamon and caramel or carmelized sugar in a few of your stories, is it just a smell that you like or do you know someone who smells that heavenly? Sorry Aussie day was a drag had to have been more fun then the terrible stuff going on in the crappy US side of the world. But cheer up we can both be dissapointed together. My Dom is a twat. I'm just glad I realized it before I really got hurt. He's still super sexy but he's selfish, self-serving, arrogant domoneering, and most of all fake to the core! He makes me want to beat his head in. But the strange thing is now that I don't like him my head is clear. He never did anything for me, we always argued, he hates when I'm right, and you know what, to hell with him I'm amazing mwhahahahaha! So yeah. But thanks for your help, decided to play with his mates(not strip I chickened out lol) but I'm hooking up with one of them, really chill sort of bloke, he makes me laugh.