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OMG FINALLY. I've been waiting for so long, I can't even remember how long. And yay, he finally got her cherry! Dom has worked quite hard for it.
Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Yes!, there will be a sequel thank you! I would have been soo sad if there wasn't... I'm sad the story is finished but all godd thing's must end nut there's a sequel so there is hope.. Hopefully, soon can't wait for more!!!!!!

THE END!? I don't believe it. This is CooCoonut by the way. missed you terribly, and the the story. But THE END!?? I hope just the end of this chapter. I've had too many stories suddenly end on me. Anyway hope you're enjoying good weather its terrible and humid here. Glad you're back. Ta.

This is a really sweet story, I love it =)
It says the story is complete, will there be another installment?
I hope to read more from you~ Thanks for the great read

I was going to say!!! lol.. u cant leave me hanging.. do they stay together or what it just screwing.. but ya i liked it but u r right it was a while so i have to say that his attitude was a bit different so it was werid to read at first.. but i got used to it. so there better be a second.. or i will be sad..

wait, Cherry is complete? It's just going to end like that? Oh let there be a sequel!

I've followed this story from beginning to end and I've loved every minute of it. Something about the writing style made it so different and refreshing and I just couldn't walk away. I have to say, however, that I am a bit disappointed with the ending. BUT, its not really the fault of the writer. Its simply my need for a happy ending, lol. If I had to give any criticism, it would be that I wish the reason for Dominick leaving would have been expounded upon. It just seemed very quick and convenient.

All in all, I adored this story. I do hope that there will be a sequel coming. I'm sure I'm not the only one that would love a happy ending.

well that sucked. not the chapter but that he had to leave so suddenly. Autumn knows his sister is sick and it is an emergency but that isn't exactly how you plan your first time ending right? Glad you made his mom cool. I mean she trusts him not to drive when he has been drinking and doesn't flip when he tells her that he is getting dressed knowing he is at party. The only way I'd pull that off is if my mom thought it was a pool party. Last but no least the 'first time' scene. I can't express to you how much I loved it. I mean you wrote it the way a first time should be between someone of their age or any age I guess. If you had made her jump him and ravish (not that I would have blamed you or her) to the point of tearing clothes than I would have been sorely disappointed. Same thing on his end. You made it smooth and sexy but still kept the nervous innocence there which is lacking in most virgin/first time scenes. This was by far one of your best chapters. Just curious. Are you going to do something like a one shot or chapter story for Autumn's sister and that friend of Dom's? The library scene was just so hot between them (Autumn and Dom too) that it leaves one to wonder. Her sister isn't a slut but I can't see her having that kind of moment and not go searching for more or trying for more. What girl in her right mind couldn't go? Thank you again for the wonderful chapter!

Well...I read this entire story from start to finish in one sitting. It really was a good read. I just couldn't help but feel as though somethng was missing though? I mean, Dominic came on pretty strong and hot and heavy, right from the start you know? It just seemed a little odd that someone would do that...especially at that age when you are sort of just getting to know yourself, and especially with a book worm who didn't seem to be in his clique...I kinda thought that there should be some fear of rejection, you know? And then I couldn't help but think that if Dominic didn't fear rejection, then he was either totally up himself, which he didn't end up being, or he had an ulterior motive...somehting to do with the Sarah cow at the beginning...but he didn't have an ulterior motive either.

So no ulterior motive for coming on hard and fast, and not up himself. And I suppose that wanting to do rude things to Autumn was motive enough, but that just kind of adds to my expectation that he would be nervous at least, if he didn't fear outright rejection. So then I was kind of like...Autumn got into it pretty fast too, and considering that it is a cliquey catholic school that they are attending (yeah,I went to one too :P), i would have thought she would be a little more cautious, especially because you made a point of detailing the various cliques at the beginning, down to where they sat even... Hmmm..

but anyway, it was a seriously good read and I'm probably just too much of a plot guesser. I can't help but think though, that it would have been brilliant if there was a little twist in there somewhere, you know? bit of betrayal? LIke, Sarah set him up to hit on Autumn to tie her up so she could smash April and then Autumn finds out once he has fallen for her and tries to de-knacker him. etc etc. I kept waiting for something to *happen*, because of all the leads you gave in the initial chapters. is that making sense? *Shrugs*

Anyway, such a good story, I mean, I read it completely from chapter 1-12 in one sitting and I rarely do that...but I can't help but feel a little ...unfullfilled? I probably haven't even spelled that right. But anyway. Nice work :)

really really really good chapter! this story is just getting better and better, and i'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter! :D keep up the good work