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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome!! can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like how the sisters banter with Sarah, very funny.
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah! He took her bag! Oh I love the pick a bone part, that was very clever! Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens the next time the two love birds have class. Is he going to manage a way for Autumn to sit in front of him so he can torment her in wicked ways? You are going to have a wonderful story here!
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Beautifully written, great characters, vivid descriptions, and totally HOT. Love it, hope you write more. Thanks!!
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...Quite a beginning. There's plenty of tension building up within the first two chapters, not to mention plenty of character being shown. There are a few grammatical errors that I could more than likely correct for you, but otherwise this is a great beginning to a story. Keep up the good work!
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to an update! I really like how you started this off. It has a lot of potential and your writing is quite good! :D
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it! ♥ Autumn and Dominick seems so cute! *3*
I hope April will be fine, Sarah sounds as a real bitch. xD
I hwant to read more asap~ *O* Great job! :)
I hope April will be fine, Sarah sounds as a real bitch. xD
I hwant to read more asap~ *O* Great job! :)
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, damn. He's hot and he's a nice guy! I'm hooked on him too! More more more! :P
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good
pleas update soon
pleas update soon
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting vair vair interesting. This isn't a oneshot right? I hope not, it is well written and I would like to read more of it as a full blown story.