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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love her! I love this story! I love how everything is so secretive and she doesn't know when he is going to attack! hehehe...Okay, does this story take place somewhere like South Africa or Australia somewhere below the equator? Just wondering cause of what he asked her about the her name and her sister's name. They were born in April but it was the Autumn season? It threw me off is why I'm asking. Love your story! You are truly a gifted writer of romance and mystery!
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok you asked if we liked Autumn or not. I really do like her quite a lot, mainly because I can relate to her and her lack of knowledge on how to...do certain things. ^_^'Not to mention she seems awkward like me too. That, and she's not a skank, thank god! Anyhoo, very nice job on this whole story, I have yet to be unimpressed.
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
>_> Well, I at least read your last A/N xD Since I'm going to let you know I like the last option... Dominic is hot because you write him to be to Autumn... We all want to be in her place.... Or at least I do. ^__________^ I love this story~ *it's bookmarked on my computer* I can't wait for more~ *hinthintwinkwinknudgenudge* and my holidays weren't too bad; lots of family time and shopping in the states with no tax. ^__^
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I LOVE this story, it's fantastic.
Probably because I can relate to Autumn and the whole unattainable crush that suddenly comes true. Though at some point, I'd like to know why it is that Dominick is all stalker-guy over her.
This story is so well written, and your POV is excellently done. I really do like it, and did mention the hotness? Yes yes, the hotness is good.
Keep it up, I'll be keeping an eye out for this.
~Alice~
(yes, that is actualy my name, and one of my bosses at work calls me Malice because I always tease him. Good times.)
Probably because I can relate to Autumn and the whole unattainable crush that suddenly comes true. Though at some point, I'd like to know why it is that Dominick is all stalker-guy over her.
This story is so well written, and your POV is excellently done. I really do like it, and did mention the hotness? Yes yes, the hotness is good.
Keep it up, I'll be keeping an eye out for this.
~Alice~
(yes, that is actualy my name, and one of my bosses at work calls me Malice because I always tease him. Good times.)
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
D, hot because...the epitome of tall, dark, handsome, and mysterious. Troubled, seductive, with a body and a brain to match (hopefully). Who wouldn't want to be seduced for something intangible--as D does to Autumn. You know what they do and feel for each other is just a bit wrong and that's why the illicitness of their encounters stirs the imagination. Great story.
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, someone reads those messages.
My holidays were crap. I call it Crappy Christmas Syndrome... it happens when you're broke and away from your friends, but blah.
I think it's Autumn that makes Dominick hot. Her perception of him paints the most tantalizing picture of a smart jockish type... 'course, just your phrasing does wonders. This could be just me, though.
Keep up the fantastic work :)
My holidays were crap. I call it Crappy Christmas Syndrome... it happens when you're broke and away from your friends, but blah.
I think it's Autumn that makes Dominick hot. Her perception of him paints the most tantalizing picture of a smart jockish type... 'course, just your phrasing does wonders. This could be just me, though.
Keep up the fantastic work :)
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story so far
hope ur holidays are great
happy new year
hope u update soon
hope ur holidays are great
happy new year
hope u update soon
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December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read your endnotes. I think that because um... what's-his-name is a hopeless romantic is the reason why he is so hot. Was the one eye lower than the other you trying to give him a flaw? If so, I think his obsession with whats-her-name is a big enough flaw. From this point on I will try to pretend you never said anything about the eye - hopefully it doesn't become like important in the grand scheme of things. It ruins him for me. Especially seeing as last semester there was a really hot guy sitting in front of me in bio...
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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He's hot for all of the reasons that you mentioned. Let's take that one liner at the end of the chapter as an example. That just... reeked hotness. I don't even know. I can't believe you just left us at that :( Just when it was going to get good. I want more! Please update soon. Even the teacher is thirsting after Dominick, but hey, who could blame her? For a second when I started reading chapter 5, I thought I was back to reading the beginning of Chapter 1 again... can't wait for that update. Please don't leave us hanging for long.
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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think it's because I want to be pressed up against a bookshelf in the library either by my hot Irish course mate, or by the photographer for the university magazine. Both YUM!
Also, it is nice to know hot guys sometimes have brains. ;) (hence the hot Irish course mate.)
Loving the story. please keep going... I'm curious about what other pen like objects he'll be offering. he he. Gotta love the dirty jokes.
Also, it is nice to know hot guys sometimes have brains. ;) (hence the hot Irish course mate.)
Loving the story. please keep going... I'm curious about what other pen like objects he'll be offering. he he. Gotta love the dirty jokes.