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DDDAAAAMMMNNN!!!!! *raises hand* (wait do you mind if I curse... I hope so) that was soooooo hot and my god if there was real a man that was at least half as good as Dom... meaning the way he treats Autumn... the respect and passion he has for her.... for every women on this planet I believe no women would want for not. Oh and by the way you write B-E-A-utifully
bye-bye

Great story!

I'm looking forward for more!

^_______________________^ Yay~ Thank you~ I really like this story. Not just for Dominic (which, by the way, he's still perfect even with his eye...) but Autumn too. I like that she's embracing what Dominic's giving and even taking charge, yet at the same time is still the blushing virgin that's unsure. I like that when you write you could see someone acting the way they do. You make it more realistic and I can't wait for the next chapter... <3 oh and... *waves hand as she jumps up and down* I do I do~

>_> It cut off the end of my post... In which i said: *jumps up and down waving hand* I DO I DO!!! (especially if he could be mine ^___^)

Okay, first off: This is very well written!! Its smutty, but in a more tasteful way...:D

And yes, i wish Dom was real! If only I could meet a guy like that !! Dominating, but also sensitive and smart and real...and not a total asshole just looking to get laid.

As for Autumn, I like her. She isn't a whore, or painstaking beautiful and not stereotyped with the perfect hourglass figure with the big chest and narrow waist...she's also real. I can relate to her quite well, actually. And besides, I wish I was in her shoes! lol

Anyway, nicely done. ^_^ I look forward to more from you.

-Hand raised and waving around in the air rapidly-

Yay! That was hot.

Um... I never really thought of why Autumn was hot. I'm like totally focused on Dominick.

Oh, god YES! If by some act of divinity Dom became real, I sure as hell would be one fo the first in line to jump his bones! :3 And of course I love Autumn! I wanna be her! Again, marvelous writing, gettign better all the time. Dare I hope for more more more? ;)

i wish he's real. he is SO sweet *swoons* haha. so very thoughtful, that guy (and hot too). well, autumn's ok. she's kinda unsure but i think that that's understandable. i mean, i'd get confused to if dominick would start doing those things to me (but i wish some hot guy would haha). anyway, keep up the good work.

okay what i think you need to have her do is ask him what he wants to come out of this is she just a toy or do he want somthing to come out of this a releation ship or what cuz with her just not asking those things and becoming such an aggressive while learning girl i dont think a virgin good girl would just random start doing stuff with out at least asking the what are we questions. and if dom was not a prep and a really cool guy that liked some of the stuff i did then yes i would like him to be real.