rate_review Reviews

Your writing is as fine as ever; though the oral seemed a bit shortened? It's hard to describe...but overall it was a wonderful chapter! And having him recite poetry while doing so...god, I wish some guy would do that to me! Yep, Autumn is gonna be one lucky girl when they finally get down to it... ;)

Haven't reviewed until now but I wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying your story. And I don't think your sex scenes are bad at all, they quite good actually and the whole work seems to flow. I would still like to see more background of both these characters too though! I like the plot that has developed!

And I find it funny you're talking about summer when over here in Canada, I'm freezing my butt off with winter! :P

I'm looking forward to the next update :)

Aww, already a new chapter!

I really loved this one!

The poem was amazing!

Keep going!!

First of all, I want to say how much I love your story! I loved the poem in the last chapter, it seemed to fit right in. I have a suggestion though. I am not a writer myself, but I have always found in stories that I have read, that a chapter or two without any smutt made the it better. I think it helped to build the sexual tension, and also helped the characters have a more emotional relationship instead of a purely physical one. You had some in the begining, but I think that perhaps now it would help as well. If you are having trouble with the smutty scenes, perhaps this suggestion will help! I hope to see a new chapter soon!

this story makes me want more i dont' get WHY he wants her so bad but damn! lol i mean autumn seems kool and everything but its like waow lol

oh man, i'm a fan... luv this story. i can't wait for the next chapter. I like autumn and i like april too. i especially like dom... yumm... teehee

Smut in hospital cleaning supply room? Ewww... they might catch something. And the licking of the arms while in a hospital is rather unsanitary.

Thanks for explaining the autumn-april thing because it confused me but I didn't put enough thought into it to realize that it was a regional difference. So like now that I know you're Australian, should i think of all the characters as having an Aussie accent?

I'd like a chapter about Dom.

chunder = vomit

please post more asap! this is awesome!!

Hi again ^^ I'm so happy you've made this a story with an actual purpose, plot and background. I mean, I'm all for the occasional one-shot smut, but that gets really old, really quick. So far, I love the characters, especially Dominick of course, mostly because he's passionate about HER and not just horny with the need to fuck someone. Does that make sense? I only ask because I usually don't ^_^"" Anyhoo, I really hope you make this a long one (only if you want to, of course) because it's really well written and I've been looking for a well-written, hot story whose author I can rely on to update regularly. Hm, apparently you're not the only one who tends to ramble...so lastly I'll say this: Very nice job, and after seven chapters I'm STILL impressed with you! Toodles and happy writing