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February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
una dulce y tierna historia, dios mio dominick es realemente tan dulce que no puede ser verdad, como hizo el amor con otoño, con todo cuidado sabiendo que ella era virgen, espero prontisimo nuevos capitulos, ana maria
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November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The End?
Could you write an Epilouge chapter perhaps, like they meet up again and decide to marry?
I very much enjoyed reading this, I hope you can write an Epilouge.
^_^
Could you write an Epilouge chapter perhaps, like they meet up again and decide to marry?
I very much enjoyed reading this, I hope you can write an Epilouge.
^_^
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome. simply awesome. now- i'll be honest. dom is too good to be true but you know what? thats fine with me. i like their relationship and i like their dialouge. update asap!
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dom is real. But his name is Chris, a name he dislikes, and he goes by Kai. And he's a beautiful jerk, his beauty has made him that way. I've met him twice, the first time we got on remarkably well and hung out and he fell asleep clutching my hand. The next time, a year later, he could care less and off-handedly divided his time amongst five pretty girls. But your description of Dominick reminded me of him, particularly about his voice. He's not a guy that any girl could have a future with, but that's okay, I just want to look at him and hear his voice... Fwah. Maybe next time I see him, I'll be able to rid my mind of him... But Dom exists.
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good writing, good story, hot smut but... that was the end? That was very... abrupt. Really awesome story until then.
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It can't be the end. *sobbs Quietly* I hope you start the sequal soon. I missed you when you were gone. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write again soon.
YOUR DEVOTED FAN
YOUR DEVOTED FAN
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July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! this was good! He was an ABSOLUTE GENTLEMAN! You wrote this incredibly well and I loved it. Please PLEASE continue the story, I'd love to see them get together again. I loved how you had him ever so gently introduce her to her sexuality. Lovely! MORE MORE MORE, please! lol
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What? That was the end? Not fair. I waited so long. So patiently... well, not that patiently. How could he just fuck her and leave after all his pining. That fucker. Bring on the sequels!
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July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the end????????? why????? didn't feel like an end
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! I love the ending and am waiting for the sequel.