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for Children of Gods and Fools

by Redeyes

person Anon
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really love your story so far ^^ can't wait for the next chapter to get put up
also i would use a unicorn/human rather then a bull/human, just because i think of unicorns more as a uke type of character and bulls more of the seme
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
unicorn for the love of god dont make it a bull
bulls are ugly while unicorns are pretty much better for the uke character lol
person shavin
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I'm intrigued so far. Please write more I really want to find out where this is going to go.
person Yuu
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An intersting start. I like the way you picture each character, though the chapter's name sounded akward. Please continue, i think this would be a great story.