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by kiix

schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God you are good. I want to be just like you when I grow up :P
person k
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hades and Liam. Superb! So Liam had been an asshole from the beginning. No wonder little Honeybee had no idea how to approach Claudius the right way. Liam deserves to be smacked around some more ... much more! That was certainly not what I expected but I love it. Sweet little Honeybee - I could read on and on about your little ancient.

Thank you for that chapter!
person lavcea
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
william is such a freakin romantic under than hard shell and his little honeybee...i'm still laughing from the first time i ever read that "hemlock" had the nickname honeybee. Great job.
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Who thought William could be so sweet? Very nice and fluff.

Oh, and Kixx, there's something wrong with your word count or you've been loosing words along the way cos in the 'Will and his honeybee' piece you say it's 8250 and it's only 1995 and the 'Sex and Sacha pole wonder' you say it's 7090 words long and it's only 1667. Please say you lost some words along the way;p
person mystic87
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Have I told you how much I love vampire bunnies? And Kitties? I love them all and this is some great fiction! I really like these mini stories. So sweet! Keep them coming!
person Tash
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww I love Hades and Liam! there so cute together. I think I'm going to think about Hades when he was young (Human) all the time now. I can't wait for more dessert!
person AsyenMari
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! This is a great idea kiix!!! Could I perhaps request a Haley x Armor ficlet?
Asyen
person Laur
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute little stories.
person AAG
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have one... you know in "Cake" when Xavier/Sex flamed for the first time it took both Marcus and Claudius to burn off the excess? well i was thinking how hot would it be if Sex/Xavier/Skell/Azreal came into contact or had something done them where they would need their prospective mates with them, and all four personalities were aware of what is happening....Sex/Xavier/Skell/Azreal along with Marcus/Armor, Claudius, and Lanny all in the same bed, being smutty together!
person k
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sex and Sasha - good as always! I love those two. Traded for a vase - Sasha, Sasha, Sasha ... :-)