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by kiix

person lavcea
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww. that poor hades. this almost *almost* makes me feel sorry for him - but he raped my cladius so - not so much. loved seeing the flashback to when they were still in the victorian age. loved it as usual. -L
person Duelriel
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I love it! You've inspired me to make vampire art, muahaha. Please more smut, I craaaaave it!
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
( Damn... I forgot the little 'less than' mark makes everything after it vanish. So much for adding a heart. anyway... on with the reveiw: )

I couldn't resist. I drew another of your lovely characters.

Cillian this time, I hope you like it: http://hellborn-phoenix.deviantart.com/art/Cillian-70825322

Claudius is up next. Already in the making, actually. Also... the dessert cart is very... delicious. I loved the story about Cillian and Liam. It was interesting seeing things from Liams' point of veiw! God, I love those two! ^^
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awe that was sweet. ^_^ Can't wait for your next update and the beginning of book 5. Ja!
person Duelriel
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT.

The first story made me laugh out loud (and get looks from the roomie). Claudius trading Sex for a vase... seems right almost, lol. Then William and Cillian.... they're so adorable together! Like... if I ever saw them I'd be like "Awww, you two are so cute!" And the last thing I ever do would be to pinch their cheeks..... before I get completely killed, of course. ;^_^

Request... request... I've got to have something.... Oh!
How about the first time Hades and Claudius were together? It think it'd be interesting to see how the honeybee felt about being with someone besides William, some nice insight to characters.....and also it would be hot. *nods*

I'ma go ahead and set a bookmark for ANOTHER one of your stories ^_^
person Cindyip
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Liam....you prev^_^
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"I had my love with me for forever…it still wasn’t long enough." =starts sobbing= omgz! That's /so/ sweet! But oh! =poutspoutspouts= i want more!! More WilliamxCillian smut! And preferably one of Cillian not drunk but back in the past. And maybe the scene of when William turned his honeybee? (though i thought he turned him when he first met him..? gah! I forgot T___T)

I also love the pole for that naughty kitty and i do have to say that this was an absolute great idea! >D i actually thought that i should request some side-smut but you beat me to it X3

Oh! =frantically waves her hand in the air= oh please some hardcore Blueberry loving with Skell! =throw hearts everywhere= not enough of them =pouts=

And my friend (who also read and likes your story) let me smell Cloves just yesterday! It was an interesting smell. Exotic and a bit spicy. You should do a tread of perfume for each characters. Something like www.blackphoenixalchemylab.com/ That'll be /so/ cool! ^0^ Gah! I'll totally buy Vanilla~ kyaa~

Another request is Vladimir. I know you kinda wanted pairings and stuff but i'm /really/ interested when he first saw Sex up in that billboard and his thoughts... and his hand while he's stroking himself =raises an eyebrow= something like that if you catch my drift. I know everyone makes him out to be a bad guy but hey... he's a Lycan... and he /was/ in love...

Another Lycan request would be Manu and Pyotr... maybe when they first met and got to doing it? Hmm... I know that "Pyotr chained by the neck in a dark place. He was just a pup and had been captured...The door to the warehouse was torn down and those that enslaved him died. Manu opened the cage and took off that hated collar. The little red pup followed Manu everywhere after that. Even after he reached the age of change and turned into an Alpha, he followed the Maori Lycan." But me want the details you know? =grins= and of course how they went about doing it... heh...

Anyways... hope you'll consider at least one of my request and if you do, hope that you'll have fun writing it... =smirks= as much as we love reading them...

Happy belated Thanksgiving,
m i l k x ness
person lone_child
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwwww~ the ending was so sweet!
thankies for another wonderful chapter~~
person Rainy
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh yay!! I'm sure at the time, William didn't consider what he was doing was rape *wonders how long it took for him to comes to terms that it was* but it wouldn't surprise me that their first time would be like that, given the time period and that William waited a long time to deflower him and I bet that he's normally not so patient.

Another property of the horn was that the owner could drink and drink and ever get drunk. <- I believe you meant never, not ever.

OH!! I know what I wanna see. Xavier and Armor: train molesting (and can include sexing) ^^ *pervy grin* Bonus points if you can somehow convince Xavier to do it while wearing a school girl uniform, with a rather short skirt. *is an odd duck*
person ayachan
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is it bad that whenever I think of Liam and Hades, I think about them fighting? This story threw me off guard a bit. But I'm a big sucker for romantic stuff, so the ending was very very sweet. :)