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by ohemgeethepeach

person Yukisa
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Huhu
I really like your kind of writing and the story seems very promising to me. i can`t wait till Edward goes to Paris!
Please update soon!
person chart451
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far. Can't wait to meet the rest of your characters.
person Anon
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. My only recommendation would be to put spaces between paragraphs - its a bit hard to read when they are blending together :)
person barara
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm.. interesting beginning. I hope to see Rene come in soon!