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for Honee

by CarnalSin

schedule May 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
this was a really good story.
person Qena
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hot!
can't wait to read more.
person ariesgirl
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was really good, im a total sucker for slave/master stories
i hope you continue this

i know you said you'd fix the fuck-ups but i just wanted to point out that you tend to use the wrong word like, you said stanza instead of stance and vial instead of vile, and you kept using the verb to wither when i think you might have meant writhe. withering means scronful where as writhe means to squirm. stuff like that.
person Mr. Nice Girl
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow. I love this. Completely love this.
person Anon
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was fantastic!! you did an excellent job... i am so excited for the next chapter!
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hot
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with your story. Please update really soon! :D No complaints at all!