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Im still hooked...I really like it so far..keep up the great work..cant wait to read the next chapter

This is an interesting story! I like where you're going with it so far. :) You'll have to update it soon. I want to know who this guy is and why he knows who she is!

oh god you have to continue I need to know what happens next

OMG!!!!!!!!! Great first chapter LOVING IT!!!!!!!!!! I beg you please update as soon as possible cause I don't think I can handle waiting so long for the next chapter....please please update fast!!!

WHAT!!! DO I WANT YOU TO CONTINUE!!! WHAT DO YOU THINK?

You give a little of what you call the "middle" away. You know "please just let me go" and "that's not an option" and then ask if you should contiune????

Your first chapter was great, your writing is very good, you describe the characters with detail. I got a good sense on what Ella is dealing with - trying to find her place - dealing with her mother's recent death - is happy with her job. Now I reall want to know what happens next. Mr. Strange Guy did seem strange - knowing her name and finding what he was looking for. But is he strange good or strange bad.

SO YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE!!!

Well it is intrigueing so far! Hope you continue!

Yes please continue this story...My interest is definately peaked...Great so far...Keep up the good work

Update update update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oh my! What's going to happen next?!? I'm sure Elle is going to be alittle suspicious of seeing this guy again in the same day!
Please update soon! By the way, what does Elle look like? Does she look like the complete opposite of Casey? I was just wondering because of her thoughts about herself and her description of Casey.

So far, so good! Can't wait to see where you go with this!