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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I must say...I love this story so far!! Keep up the good work and please...more,more,more!!
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very intriguing! I can't wait to hear Lucien's explanation..has he chosen her as his mate? I love that she is a fighter! She may have had a boring life but at least she was the ruler of it! I love how he expected her to be greatful that he took her from her life without her consent. That was hilarious.
Can't wait until the next chapter!!
Can't wait until the next chapter!!
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loving the story so far and i like the little line added from labyrinth it fitted perfectly, update soon please. xx
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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to the new chapters :)
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A good start to a story. A few cliches (mostly in the adjectives) but overall enjoyable. I look forward to what comes next.
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, this story is awesome so far. You definitely surprised me on who Lucian was. I like Elle, she has spunk. I can't wait to see what else you have in store for this story. Keep up the great work.
~Diana
~Diana
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OK - the "eating disorder" joke was great.
The chapter was really well written. Good detail, good decription.
As for plot - I really didn't know it was a other worldy kinda thing. I was hoping he wasn't talking about Hell when he pointed down. I don't read stories with Angels, God, or Satan. I was about to cry, but I finished the chapter and it seems more Greek mythology. You mentioned the "underworld realm" - that might make him Hades. In which case - I love. You can really write anything with Greek mythology.
Of course now I have a lot of questions, but for now I'll keep them to myself. I'll just say - she was pretty stupid for not paying attention where she was walking with a stranger. Or even going outside alone with a stranger. But I like the red riding hood reference - that was good too.
I await your next chapter.
The chapter was really well written. Good detail, good decription.
As for plot - I really didn't know it was a other worldy kinda thing. I was hoping he wasn't talking about Hell when he pointed down. I don't read stories with Angels, God, or Satan. I was about to cry, but I finished the chapter and it seems more Greek mythology. You mentioned the "underworld realm" - that might make him Hades. In which case - I love. You can really write anything with Greek mythology.
Of course now I have a lot of questions, but for now I'll keep them to myself. I'll just say - she was pretty stupid for not paying attention where she was walking with a stranger. Or even going outside alone with a stranger. But I like the red riding hood reference - that was good too.
I await your next chapter.
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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! Whoa, Elle is going to be so pissed when she wakes up....poor thing, she is so sweet but I'm sure he already knows that! *wink*
It will be interesting to see how she is connected to him... Was she destined to be his? Is she his lover from a previous life? Did he just randomly select her...he did know her name....
Fantastic second chapter!!!!
It will be interesting to see how she is connected to him... Was she destined to be his? Is she his lover from a previous life? Did he just randomly select her...he did know her name....
Fantastic second chapter!!!!
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! Great story so far!! I love Elle's character. I'm not sure about Lucien yet...too many questions! I hope you update this soon, I can't wait to see what happens when Elle wakes up.
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great fic! :)